Mafia God!

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Description

One man, did everything to get power, not so he could abuse it, but so he could change his messed up world!After training for so long, he finally stood at the top of his world, but everything was taken from him, the ones he tried to save, stabbed him in the back!He vowed if he gets a second life he wouldn't try to change the world, he would make it kneel to him and change it with force!He was granted a 'Second Chance' from a god but given a mission to take over the world!But he was not sent back to his world, instead, he was sent to earth!What will the man who lived in a kill or be killed world do on earth!This is the story of the Mafia God!_____________________________________________________________________________________________You can also read it at my website : https://saleban1.wordpress.com/Also make sure to read my other novels.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: saleban1

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 561
Views: 304,456

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Community Reviews(6)

LordgloryRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Okay, I am really a nuub at this but I will tell you what I think about this story so far.
Style- I really loved the style of the story, it really got to me, I felt connected with it, I don't how to explain it in words so I will just say I was speechless :D 5/5
Story - Okay I love this story so I will give it 5/5 mafia is my thing and fantasy is my heaven so this is really my thing :D 5/5
Grammar- I really didn't find anything wrong with it so I will give it a 5/5
Character - So far only the mc's personality has been created and it is awesome, If you're going to develop the other side characters personality the same way than it would be perfect, so I will give it 5/5 for now, might change it later.
Anyway keep up the good work!!
kaneki kenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like the story a lot, so i think it would be good if you continue with this story is really great. I have read your others story but i like this one the most. Sorry for my poor english. oh and i like the main character personalitym i think is really great
mr.mas :3Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Its so gooooodd
Give it a try
You won't regret it
Moreover you will love it
Author... please add harem tag in your story
I really appreciate very much
Thanks
emboRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Good job there!
Story 5/5
Style 5/5
Character 4.5/5, give me more CUNNING MC!
IlisleRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
ok , this is my first time that im doing this, but here we go
So for the Style, i think it's pretty good, i got no problem with it
The Story, this part : i think it's going to fast , it's feels rushed and need some more time on developing it. Making things more clair and describing more. There's alot of stuff that you could have added in the chapters ; like the place, features, etc.. So for that I gave you 3/5.
The Grammar : you are doing well on it, but even thought im not strong in english there are still some mistakes that i see. So for that 3.5/5
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The Character: For a person that had already lived a life and saw the life of someone from a Earth similar to the one he is . I think, he is not very clever. As he just declares in front of multiples gangs WHEN HE IS A KID (14-15 i think) a territory that they are fighting for. Adding to the fact that they had guns and all the stuff makes me facepalm. And multiple other things that im not going to write about. I give the Character
2.5/5
Almost forgot this is a review when i had read until chapter 10 2016/09/16
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216581Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
this should be a good 1 maybe the plot summary is not really the plot summary