Jason is Isekai'd into a world of fantasy with a pinch of cultivation. With his hax mental ability and a barebones system, Jason embarks on his adventure across the land: Slaying monsters, making friends and getting stronger.

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★★★ 3.0

There's something here, that's for sure.
But, to go into more detail:
This story has a lot of potential and it's clearly doing something, but the lack of description in... er, everything, that's bogging the story down quite a lot. Chapter 7 onwards has the '07' indicator, but the annoying thing is that the other chapters don't. The characters, although they do have a personality, are a bit one dimensional. The main character - isekai'd, presumably, - has not mentioned a single thing about his past life, what he did, who he was, or anything at all.
Well, he says his name is Jason... but there's just no thought behind it. We don't know what any character is thinking, we barely know what the characters are doing, and it feels like they just show up to say what they need to say before disappearing into the ether, only to be brought up again for the plot.
I don't mean to be a harsh critic, but this story - to me - is like a poorly cooked meal. The chef is learning, but there's no seasoning, hardly any meat, and - for some reason - "bro" is used a lot outside of dialogue. Things just aren't described in any meaningful way.
What does the main character look like? Figure it out! Who are the other characters? Well, let's introduce 7 before we reach chapter 3, and you better remember them all.
This story has potential, but it's unseasoned. Stats are sometimes mentioned - like in chapter 2, where it's offhandedly added that Jason (presumably) got "[+0.05 STR]", but what do they mean? Who knows, figure that out yourself, too! Stats aren't explained whatsoever.
I don't know if I'm just being too harsh, or maybe I just need to read more, but this story just feels bland. What is Jason's goals, dreams, motivations? Why does he do what he does? Well, he wants money to live alone. Okay, why does he want to live alone? He doesn't like mooching off others. Okay, so... anything else? No? He's just the overpowered protag?
I know this review is long, and rambled, and 'top of my head' stuf

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