Machine ascend [Mech army summoning system/LitRPG]

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After being killed, Sam wakes up in the body of a bastard prince. Finding himself in a foreign world, and with a new found power. He sets to go against everything and change what he couldn't in his past life.

Chapters(22 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • BobosfluffercatRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I typically don't like to criticize incomplete bodies of work because I don't feel that I've gotten the full picture. So I won't. However, it could be argued the chapters themselves are individually complete. All I will say is that I like this story and how it combines "future tech" or modern conventional tech with high fantasy elements. I like the writers tone as far as the dialogue of the characters and I think that it really colors their personalities. I don't mean this negatively (do people still get made fun of for watching anime?) but it's almost like watching/reading an anime/manga which I enjoy. Anywho, if you are reading this Chronicle, good job on your first story series keep it up and I look forward to more.
  • SetelRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    From what I'm going to the story I am fairly enjoying it right now I would like longer chapters but I know that this guy is his first story so I won't blame it the mechs are interesting I would recommend making it a bit harder to get exp like don't give him a large amount of EXP decreased the amount of exp gets for more robots he has say if he has 400 robots the XP gets 400 times harder to obtain as in it's slower other than that I'm already enjoying it I hope to see more of it in the future and it doesn't go on a hiatus like usual with other stories
  • The_Eternal_PalaceRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The book knows what it wants and doesn't waste any time getting there.
    The book starts with the MC having next to nothing – as is tradition – And then rapidly progresses to the point of having armies of tens of thousands of troops.
    Things like character development or worldbuilding make for a good story. But robot ninjas and battle tanks make for a fun story. And it's clear where the author's priorities lie.
  • ironjack8774Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    the story is great and its a really cool idea for a book, i did find quit a few spelling errors tho and that makes it kind of hard to read i have to read some sections a few times before i get whats being said, it also flows a-little weird i find in hard to tell whos talking some times