Maakur: Rise of the fallen

Hello everyone! This is something that i wrote by being bored. It's also my first FF so it might be good it might be bad i have no idea i just wrote what was on my mind and the story will continue to go on like that.This is a story about Maakur who instead of getting reincarnated after serving his sentence gets something completely unexpected.I don't want to revel to much with the description a much better description will come when the story has 5-10 chapters ^^ As of now i just want to see where this takes me and how i should go on with it. Feel free to come and check it out.