Luka´s Reading Steiner
Self-Published
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Description
Urushibara Luka, aka Lukako. The mannerisms and the voice of a woman...
No. More feminine than any woman...
But he is a boy.
About Lukako and what would happen if he had been the one with the Reading Steiner, ability to preserve his memories from one timeline to the other, instead of Okabe.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- erintesden
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 808
Chapters(1 total)
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- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0As a Stein's Gate fanfic, this has what I hoped would be relatively strong prose, characters and plot. This did not happen and the Reading Steiner aspect is not particularly defined or clear. We have some of the more outlandish takes at the end, but Okabe is not funny and weighs on the story itself.
The fact that this is a translation means that the prose itself is awkward in many places (particularly the middle) where it becomes problematic. While the purpose of this fic is to show the differences if it were Luka, the entire plot itself would collapse given the totality of events. A softer approach, not dwelling on the implications, leaves this as a decent story hampered by the rough translation.