Lost souls: Road to Godhood (Isekai) [Writathon Participant]
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In a world where mages stand above nobles and even the law, it's not surprising that everyone wants to learn magic. Luz and his brothers are no different.
However, their peaceful lives are shattered when a dragon attacks their village. Left with no choice, Luz uses a forbidden spatial spell to save his brothers. The consequences are not pretty--he and his brothers are scattered across different realms.
Luz will have to travel to places unknown to reunite his family and gain enough power to take vengeance on the dragon. Armed with a single spell that he can only cast once before his magic reserves are depleted, Luz has his work cut out for him.
Being the oldest is never easy.
Author note: Please be warned as the book won't be what you might expect since the early chapters of my work are more of a slice of life of an MC, trying to adjust to his new life rather than slaying monsters left and right from the get-go with accelerated growth cheat and missions given by a goddamn system that forges your path, since everyone knows: an MC needs a system that tells one how to move forward.
That was a long sentence. Also, some of you might consider my chapter titles as clickbaity, while others like me might consider them: not boring titles, hehehe.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- unknownking
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- Rating
- 3.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 10
- Views
- 11,173
Chapters(32 total)
- Status update: AUTHOR WHY HAVEN’T YOU UPDATED IN LIKE THREE DAYS!?Apr 26, 2022
- 30. What is the worth of your moral superiority in a world where nobody values it?Apr 23, 2022
- 29. A young and tender child. What more could I ask for?~Apr 22, 2022
- 28. YOU DISTURBED THE RESTING PLACE OF THE WRONG MOTHERFUCKER, YOU GODDAMN BRATApr 20, 2022
- 27. I ran out of clickbait chapter ideas… so just let your imagination run wildApr 19, 2022
- 26. Theory… I don’t need that. Time to skip itApr 18, 2022
- 25. I should stop overestimating my MC title bonusApr 17, 2022
- 24. Why has a twig so much power over me?Apr 16, 2022
- 23. DON’T TOUCH MY MEAL WITH YOUR FILTHY FINGERS YOU BARBARIANApr 15, 2022
- 22. No rest for you, darling,~Apr 13, 2022
- character showcase.Apr 13, 2022
- 21. DON’T LEAVE ME ALONE WITH THAT MONSTER.Apr 12, 2022
- 20. Ah, I see… Master Brian caught another PokemonApr 11, 2022
- 19. Too bad that I don’t give a single f*ck about it.Apr 10, 2022
- 18. You definitely won’t be sleeping well in the future after seeing your medical bills.Apr 5, 2022
- 17. SHUT-THE-FUCK-UP AND PAY RENT TENANT.Apr 4, 2022
- 16. I expect your best tea by the time I reach you, SIMOOON.Apr 4, 2022
- 15. You know what? More info dumps. I promise there won’t be any more than that, for the time being.Apr 3, 2022
- 14. could you please shut the f*ck up for a goddamn moment? I’m trying to enjoy my peaceApr 2, 2022
- 13. Theory, Theory, and even more theory. I hate theoryApr 2, 2022
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Community Reviews(2)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0It isn't left at least. Directions might be hard to understand when read in this fiction. Going through it, I did have some trouble getting my head around how the scenes really worked. Some of the wording felt off, though that might be due to the author having English as a second language. Not sure.
It needs editing on the grammar and style. The conversations could have some work done as well. Felt stilted at one too many times.
4/5 - 3DDRoyal Road★★★ 3.0With a change of writing style and some editing, this could be a good story - just my personal taste as it may appeal to other readers.
The grammar and punctuation is of reasonable quality. It is not so bad that it takes away from reading the story - though it would help with reading multiple chapters at once.