Lost in space

Self-Published

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Description

A man goes on a journey beyond time and space he has entered the error zone

Currently just a plot that I had stuck in my head

Will update and have a better name someday

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Error 501

Tags

LITRPGACTIONADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADCOMEDYTRAGEDYSCI-FISLICE OF LIFEGAMELITPSYCHOLOGICALMALE LEADSHORT STORYSOFT SCI-FISTRATEGYSPACE OPERA

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Views
126

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

  • TheBreakernewRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    From the preface this seems like a well put together story. It has a nice hook and I'm looking forward to more.
  • DunimonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Despite what one review says, the MC is not overly petty and acts well within reason; I almost didn't pick it up because of his or her exaggeration. Moving on, grammar and spelling have so far been impeccable. It flows and is quite enjoyable. The characters are interesting and the story has a lot of potential.
  • mplaysbgRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Perfect. It's perfect. Maybe you need to give us a little more info about a his girl and add a few side characters that communicate more with him. Story is believable and i love it. I have only one little problem with...
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    How when the game beggin he didnt buy the more expensive apartment to re sell in to the auction it the other day. He didnt even mention it.
    He didnt know about emergence quests. I like how you executed this but to me it look like you just give him free boost. (plot armor)
    Right now (as of chapter 18) it look like you will give him whole base for nothing.
    Please add more info about the different factions. Please make chapter with list of all his skills or add them at the bottom of every few chapters. Please keep with the cool art and the perfect grammar. Please add Virtual Reality as a tag.
    Thank you for your work on this novel. Keep going.
  • SammavetRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Is stories like this which make me wish I knew how to read Russian so I didn't have to wait for a translation.
    There are some minor translation issues (proper translation VS native English speaker translation stuff), but that hasn't taken away from the story.
    I can't wait to see the rest of this story
  • Daoist_EverhopeRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Pretty good overall, the story and its flow are pretty good, the grammar is to be expected of a translation, it's only weakpoint is that the main character is really petty and takes everything way too personally, which is pretty annoying