Lost and Understanding

Self-Published

Description

Short story about a girl lost in an unknown world

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Mech_WizardRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Interesting idea and a good job on so few words, but the execution has a few rough spots.
The thing that I disliked was how we barely have any idea about what her surroundings look like, and a small detail about what her body appears like.
With a little work, it could be much more spooky.
Also, what part of this is sci-fi? For me, for something to be sci-fi, it has to depict either advanced or fantastical technology/tools, or have a clear outer space setting.
Other than that, nice fic. I would read more.
RznRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The lack of context and grounding makes this a bit awkward at first, having seen the author's comments in response I could understand it more so, but this really does feel like some sort of dream sequence. A strange encounter for sure, but what is the plot? What is the purpose? It doesn't really give any food for thought and stands alone by itself. A short read for sure, but I do not feel that it does more than give off a creepy vibe.