Lord of Glory
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
You might know me as Santa Claus, Saint Nicholas, Saint Nick, Father Christmas, Kris Kringle, Santy, or simply Santa.I am the one who comes into your house every Christmas night and leaves behind a present for you only if you have been a good girl/boy and if you were a bad girl/boy.....Well, you of all people should know me."what is going on!""Hold on I can't die like this I got so many houses left....ho ho ho"Where am I?This is not the earth I know.Where are the fireplace's in the world why can't I feel their profound energy!And who are you people, how are you so strong?[Warning 18+ Gory scene, sexual scenes, and strong language]
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- saleban1
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 511
- Views
- 25,687
Chapters(8 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(10)
- saleban1Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Okey please tell me what you think about this and please make sure to tell me of any mistakes I might have made be it grammar or wording as I want to create something everyone can understand enjoy also if you have any problem understanding something please just ask and I will reply as fast as i can with an answer Also English is not my native language and i am very new writer so please excuse me for future mistakes thank you :D
- LordgloryRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Other than few mistakes here and there this story is readable and although it's a bit rushed at the beginning i hope you slow down a little so you won't finish this faster I WANT OVER 150+
THANK YOU!! - Otamega~A~Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0The story so far is interesting and LoG can be considered a very creative story with a OP MC who is whimsical and childish at times . The grammar used in the story so far is in my POV quite okay,
so i don't think there are anything wrong with the grammar.
The plot holes can be ignored because the story is interesting.
I REALLY hope that this story goes on for at least 250+ chapters 'cause i like the story.
The author and the story has great potential...
Thanks for the Story Mr.Autor!
Hardcore OP MC is the best!..... Enjoyable! love it all.... - kay.lensonRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0nice story... with OP mc..
it has some plot hole like you are making one year boy walk & talk and every one expect as normal..
well overall i like it. - LynetteLuxemburgRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0So far I'm enjoying the story, I can't give an advanced review backside there's something wrong with my computer, but the style is pretty average, story wise quite interesting so far. I'm looking forward to seeing the second arc. Grammer didn't really give me a problem because it's quite okay and I'm not someone who craves for big bombastic vocabulary.
MC is OP obviously and his time stopping ability is ridiculously OP, which he uses to do ridiculous things. Anyway, I recommend this story to everyone. :) :) :) - DemineraRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5First and far most; sry for anny bad grammar, I'm good at reading not writhing.
Starting opinion:
Santa as MC, ingenious! But!... It has it's drawbacks. I have only read to the 6 chapter. But still, your MC is santa the man who loves children (as his own), the merry man. The guy with a big belly (grandmas home made cookis mmmmmm), big beard and allways laughing "ho ho ho". You chose an MC wich everyone has knowlage of and that means you have to be true to that charackter.
Had you on the other hand chosen to make an original charakter then I guess I don't have a problem with his charakteristcs. You have a unrefind gem, you just need to polich it.
Style:
I have seen difrent styles of writing and yours is not one of the boring ones. You drag me in and you let me see the story it was intriging even if there could be much more you could whrite. This was true until the time jump "9 years old" where I feel that you have not giving you writhing that flare and mostly "uploaded information" on to the reader.
Story:
As for the story I like it so far, I don't know exaktly where you are heading road whise but I belive you have alredy set the goal in a good way. And as I seen manny other comment here "It has much potential"
Grammar:
Well I can't help you there... I can read it so I see no problem in it.
Characters:
Exept for MC did you have anny other characters? Thats how it felt. Ofcourse there where it was just that they where kinda non existent to the story. And you have a tendensy to just leting them pop up "unanounsed" and the let them faid in the wind. Exeption for James walker and you did put in som information for his mother the queen.
End words:
I personally belive that you should put some more story and charakter indeapths at the stage where santa is still an infant. It's easy to exuse the MC absens by manny baby like problems such as hed sleeping all the time. Then at that time you could introdus charakters esential to the story. For exampel the body guard he has by - RamennRoyal Road★★★ 3.0it’s good, very good I like it, it’s just the characters need more depth. MC is supposed to an adult, but he act like a child, that’s what I feel from him.
And why the heroine is so easy to conquer ?! I forget how many times she blush in one chapter… she’s so cheap, the characters need more work.
The conversation is also a bit weird or off. it's like a raw script without emotion in it, like two dolls talking to each other.
what a waste of good gem. - jazzo7Royal Road★★★ 2.5You've read invisible dragons before haven't you. You must have. This is invisible dragon all over again. For those who don't know what invisible dragon is look it up on novelupdates and you will understand what I mean.
- HimamoriRoyal Road★★ 1.5Keep your delusions in check Mr author, dropping this sorry.
At first I thought the story seemed kind of fun but after reading up to chapter 14 I just get more and more disappointed.
I know I can't expect you to be a genius author but mate..build up some story, build up some character and after that slowly tell your story. It feels like my cousin (3 years old) tells me a story.
"And then they make a house and boom everything explodes even the moon, but he survives and finds 1000 gold and ten new friends who are all fun, but because they don't like paprika the sun explodes"
That's how I can grade your story.. - SrPyroRoyal Road★ 0.5Pre-20 is actually decent. After that, it gets worse and worse. The MC gets so OP that it's no fun to read at all. Oh yeah, I'm mad cause my limitless stats didn't transfer over from the universe I created, why not destroy a mountain cause I can? It's pretty bunch of bullshit. Sure, why not burn a WHOLE forest just to level up. The MC is a piece of sh*t that acts good once in a while to feel better.