Lord of Dreams - A Multiverse Fanfiction

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Description

Our Lucky MC Lorien finds himself in face of a very important decision

Either stay in his world and continue with his short and normal life

Or Journey into the infinite void where countless worlds and infinite possibilities exist

Worlds: Demon Slayer (Finished) -> Highschool of the Dead (Finished) -> Jujutsu Kaisen (Current World).

Planned Worlds: (Chainsawman...)

Possible Worlds:(One piece, Naruto, TODG, BTTH...)

Note: Put World Suggestions below or in the chapters comment section so I can make a plan early on as to not make it appear out of place

Release Schedule: Once every 2/3 days

Ps: No System

DISCLAIMER(1): All things that are written in this novel are pure work of fiction that has no connection with reality, it's all pure imagination used to pass the time and nothing more! Be it social, political, or religious, so be warned and read at your own discretion, manage your reading time well, and don't get disconnected from real life

DISCLAIMER(2): I obviously don't own any of the original already existing worlds I will or already wrote about, all rights belong to their respective owners

DISCLAIMER(3): The background of the cover is made byRachelblandon, This is theImage, Which I have added elements to and modified a bit

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Houssem

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 135
Views: 261,025

Chapters(265 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

JacksDawRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
A decent story, it however has two big flaws in my opinion and a couple pet peeves of mine. The first flaw is that the story is very "talky." we are told what is happening in a very straightforward almost dry way and there is an overall lack of emotion and tension in the story. That is to say it reads like a grocery list sometimes. Flaw two is that the actual fan fiction elements I.E. the world of Demon Slayer feels a but underutilized. Now for the pet peeves. The protagonist and his powers. the protagonists personality is a weird mixture of psociopath and your average joe that a lot of stories seem to use. He thinks with ice cold unappealing logic and then always backtracks immediately. He comes across odd and unnapealing to me. As for his power set the concept is fine its just that the author immediately made him op and focuses only on power development. I want to see more of the world and more personality from the mc and supporting cast.
ToasterForkerAnonymousRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
First off I have to get this out there: the amount of "sexual content" in this novel felt underwhelming. Normally when I see the tag there is at least some serious fanservice or more Adult content, here I honestly couldn't point to a specific area that I could say "that right there officer" as to the smoking gun for the tag. Granted I may just be highly desensitized to sexual content as I read many adult novels, so my view may be heavily salted.
On to the actual review however. Overall, I am still going to be reading this as I found it to be still quite enjoyable despite some issues I will bring up below. I finished Vol. 1 and am going to be reading Vol. 2 so long as the author doesn't do something that would put me off. It do be shrimple as dat.
Style
A first person isekai with very few interludes that never overstay their welcome for a non-MLC novel. Though due to this novel being published on WN as well, the chapters tend to feel artificially cut off at times. Some chapters should have been combined with several others due to how they abruptly come to cliffhangers. As I had binged the first Vol. I do not know if the cliffhangers will become a problem for me in the future, but a reader can hope right?
Grammar
Very small issues with this novel. The occasional misspelt word or wrong word choice popping up here or there, which is fairly common for a lot of series on this site. Not many periods as, due to above mentioned WN affiliation, each 'paragraph' is just a glorified sentence. Mind you the sentences never become so egregious that it is a struggle to read aloud (Always read aloud your work when you are editing! If it doesn't sound good, fix it.).
Story
You follow the Hero get Isekaid because of a goddess needing an eventually powerful ally to help her in a quite literal timeless battle. The overarching story as such has no real time challenge. MC-kun can literally take eons traipsing about worlds collecting women like postage stamps and by the time he is thoroug
PickyReaderRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This doesn't feel like a novel, it reads like a script for one, like the author uploaded their notes they used as a template for the novel rather than the finished product. People don't talk to eachother, we're told they talked already and came to a conclusion, he doesn't do anything, we're told he's already done it and here's the results. I was giving it the benefit of the doubt until the author gave up on the novel entirely and started copy pasting the usual easy tropes.
Not even 20 chapters in we just get stuck with swordsmanship. Why is a newborn god with the ability to alter reality and travel the multiverse learning to swing a stick around like some caveman? Because it's even easier than just writing a novel, why bother coming up with stuff for the mc to have already done when you can just go with swords.