This is a cultivation world that is focused on smut where a 'union' is the most common way for people to advance. Our mc is a broken orphan(in many ways) who tries to go through his cultivation journey in such a world.

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Mr. MochiRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

This is a good read, until you realize the characters have the personality of children. Main female character becomes completely dependent on the master and his attention and becomes fairly irrelevant outside sexy times. She's a pretty face and nothing else. Unfortunately we have to read about her master catering to her almost every whim because he's autistic and has no social skills or clue on how to raise an apprentice.
It's also one of those stories that whole narrative revolves around characters being oblivious and ignorant while others make mistaken assumptions. Personally I think disguises and hiding power levels are just word bloat and a cheap plot thread. It over complicates nothing into something, that ultimately we rely on the author to prove meaningful. Based off the chapters so far, I'm doubtful.
I think if you read this story for the sexy times and smut, you will be satisfied, but if you are hoping for an engaging Xianxia "Nana to Touro" type story, you are going to be left unsatisfied.
The reason I gave it 3/5 is because the story starts strong, but quickly becomes unfocused and messy. It's hampered by the main character- his only noteworthy traits are he's strong and focused- he might as well be a rock in a slice of life story.

crypticorbRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

If you're looking for a simple story with sexy times, then it has that in spades, but all the main characters are empty. There is little to no description of the local environment, the culture, the cultivation system, the local technology level, the global power structures (mystical or mundane), or even backstory for the characters.
The main character is a prefabricated OP near-demigod, who has deigned to bestow power upon an empty-headed babe some of his power, for reasons poorly explained, via sex.
There is only two things that hold the story together: first, the main character has overpowered gifts in cultivation that make him heaven-blessed, but it never seems like he earned these gifts, and second, the descriptions of sexy times.
Grammar is average, with mostly only missing commas and run-on sentences.
The only plot point that is unique is that Masters can take on Disciples to have sex with, male or female, and this somehow bestows power from the higher cultivation to raise the disciples cultivation, while somehow giving back something to the master, though this last bit is not well explained. Pregnancy is apparently not a thing.

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