Long Shot
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
The battle is lost. Her ship isn't yet.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Chixiepixie
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 214
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5The story opens with a lot terms a lot of capitalized aspects that are not explained. Why the 'Altar room' why 'The Rider, the Captain, Sanctum'. It all goes to removing a path to emotional connection, it is like trying to say everything is alien and yet familiar. There is no context for what they are fighting, why or anything more than the terrible situation they are in. It is a bit confusing and vague and does not resolve that by the end. The story dips in and out, seemingly afraid to explain itself and that doesn't make it mysterious, it just makes it awkward.