Lone warrior
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Main character is a girl if you're wondering it's a little fast but I tried rate it your honest opinion . So I can improve hehe
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- ilikewriting
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Views
- 126
Chapters(3 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0This was an incredibly rushed piece that has a bunch of very long run on and awkward sentences telling the story of becoming OP. It does not make a lot of narrative sense as this is more or less an outline with a focus on the 'numbers-go-up' and revealing the extent of one's power in more detail than anything else. It needs a copyedit and to be fleshed out and it would be much more readable then.