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Status

Hiatus

Year

2018

Author

badw0lf

• Chapter 18 – All shall bow to the will of the great turtle
  Jun 25, 2020
• Chapter 17 - What wise men fear...
  Jun 10, 2020
• Chapter 16 - Take a look, it's in a book. - Reading Rainbow
  Mar 15, 2018
• Chapter 15 - Bittersweet memories
  Feb 28, 2018
• Chapter 14 – Speak softly and carry a big stick.
  Feb 23, 2018
• Chapter 13 - I think every creature near enough to hear that just pooped and then went into hiding.
  Feb 22, 2018
• Chapter 12 - Cue the motivational music and let the training montage begin!
  Feb 19, 2018
• Chapter 11 - If only Robin Hood were here
  Feb 9, 2018
• Chapter 10 - It's all fun and games until someone....
  Feb 4, 2018
• Chapter 9 – I come in peace. Wait, what was the other bit? Oh yeah, take me to your leader.
  Jan 31, 2018
• Chapter 8 - Over the river and through the woods...
  Jan 29, 2018
• Chapter 7 - Further down the rabbit hole
  Jan 28, 2018
• Chapter 6 – Yippie-ki-yay, motherf**kers!
  Jan 26, 2018
• Chapter 5 - Kool-aide? sure, I've love to drink it.
  Jan 26, 2018
• Chapter 4 - So long and thanks for all the fish!
  Jan 25, 2018
• Non-chapter 1 - audience participation time
  Jan 23, 2018
• Chapter 3 - With a flick of the wrist.
  Jan 23, 2018
• Chapter 2 - Bureaucrats. Why did it have to be bureaucrats?!
  Jan 19, 2018
• Chapter 1 - Can someone please tell me what is going on?
  Jan 17, 2018
• Prologue
  Jan 15, 2018

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• gyro2deathRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Let me start by stating there are only two ways I've ever come across several thousand stories I've read on how to write a character who is "OP" and not ruin it.
  This first is to make them overpowered in one aspect yet have the plot require a different aspect. An example of this is to have a genius of strategy in a world where martial power rule.
  The second way is to make it a slice of life story. Sadly everyone only writes the former style stories usually. This story is thankfully the latter. This review is going to be long and primarly for the author. I'm sure some will enjoy the depth of the review but I want to give some feedback for the author first and foremost.
  Main Characters:
  We're not very far in but so far we have an MC who is basically the good guy we always want to see in a novel. The author has added in a few cracks to him and we'll have to see how they develop but so far it looks like the MC is in need of some healing after being stuck loading for so long. I just hope the author doesn't go for the NTR/Tragedy aspect to awaken an enraged MC death god but it doesn't fit this stories mood so I'm betting against it.
  For companion characters, this story is moving slowly but making solid progress. We have the primary companion which is a sudo-daughter with a standard tragic backstory and unique powers. I have a slightly bad feeling that she might get kidnapped to move the plot along so I pray I'm wrong on that because she's adorable. She's is kept quite the mystery by the author but I have a feeling she'll drive the plot, just hopefully not by being kidnapped....
  A possible love interest has arrived but I can't tell if the author will let the MC grow out of the typical EQ of anime harem lead. To be fair he has a reason to be a bit dense but I have a feeling love interest will be more likely to go the direction comedy rather than romance.
  Side Characters:
  This is what makes or breaks a slice of life and so far it's going well. The author likes to brag about
• neko123Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Well fleshed-out story with a descent plot so far. Overpowered main character which doesnt distracts from the story like in so many other novels.
  The grammer is not perfect but the vocabulary is bountiful and the descriptions are filled with life. The occasionally missing word and wrong sentence structure can be overlooked.
  But what is absolutely annoying and the reason I am writing this review in the first place, is the excessive use of brackets inbetween sentences to describe something not part of the story itself.
  If you decide to edit this story in the future, please remove all the author annotations from the story and put them in the correct place (the authors notice at the end or beginning of the chapter).
  Spoiler warning (or reference for author): Check chapter 12, that is the worst one so far, and you will know what I mean.
  In the first paragraph you have a fourth-wall breach (which can be good... but decide for yourself) and in the second paragraph you actually explain to people how you can convert units which breaks the flow of this sentence completely. And some paragraphs further down, you inserted a description about the medieval times, long enough to not even remember the beginning of the sentence.
  Please take this as constructive criticism, I really like the story so far but this just breaks immersion.
• MontinjeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  All chapters so far are great (first 13). The story is interesting and well structured. The over powered aspect of the main character is funny and well handled with some illusion to greater powers that can get involved to ballance the power levels if it gets boring (it is far from that at the moment). The MC having a father like tendecies are really good as is the responsiveness to comments. (I am satisfied with the little enchantress.)
  It is amazing Keep it up.
• ceallachRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  A fun little romp with an overpowered MC, tempered with a little girl he has to protect. I've enjoyed what has been written so far immensely and am now waiting sadly for more :)
• randompeepsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I was going to give you four stars and have my other scores(style, grammar, etc.) be varied corresponding to your level of skill, but I decided to give a five out of five just because some dumbass (Gnarlytreeman) gave you a 0.5 star.
• Mighty MoushieRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  The first eight chapters are great. There is plenty of humor, and the characters all seem to be believable. There are a few spelling errors per chapter, but you can easily figure out what the author was saying and they have plans to go back and edit at some point. I'm looking forward to reading more.
• eljako98Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I don't normally post reviews, but I think the wildly varying reviews for this story make it a very hard story to judge just from the reviews. With that being said, so far there's only 14 chapters available, so not a lot of content to review, but I'll give it my best shot. (mild spoilers as well)
  Story: So far the overall story is pretty good. It's fairly obvious from the beginning that the MC is going to be incredibly OP, so I think maybe adding a tag for that to the story would be beneficial, but it's (somewhat) explained in a manner that is plausible within the story world. We haven't got a complete backstory on the MC yet, so my opinion may change, but so far we know just enough to keep guessing. Outside of that, the main plotline really hasn't progressed far enough to give much of a review, but the premise (and some of the plotting surrounding the main characters) is interesting and entertaining.
  Characters: I think this is one of the better parts of the story, although due to the lack of MC's backstory I have a hard time reconciling some of his actions. If he DID spend all his time in a tutorial world, why is he both so confident in his abilities, and why is he willing, able, and unbothered by killing people in unknown environments? After the fact, its fairly obvious that they deserved to die, but at the time he had little to no information to work with, so it makes it a bit suspect. Other than that, I like the MC and Eli, which are the only two characters we've gotten much info on so far.
  Grammar: Nothing to complain about in the grammar itself, but the author has a tendency to introduce random side comments within the story (like why X part of the story relates to his wife) that can break the immersion. While I do like reading those side comments, especially since they're actually normally either entaining or interesting, I think they'd be far more beneficial to be noted with a superscript (like this1) rather than just thrown in randomly.
  Overall, I think it
• Deathknight Angels DreadRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I usually don’t write reviews mainly because I don’t like logging in but I felt that I should do it now instead of never.
  I really don’t understand why some people are complaining about brackets so much that they base their entire review on it nor why some people like to rag on the story as bad and overly done when I in-fact find it well done and a tutorial stuck = op mc I have only seen in one other novel King of the Mountain. I had been reading it since I saw it released chapter 3 and I was novel surfing as I was waiting for other stories to update and thought “seems interesting enough”.
  Well I found this story really enjoyable when I read it months ago as I find it has a nice premise and while I do agree that the brackets are annoying at times I don’t think that they bring the style score to .5 unlike some.
  I also wanted to write this as an encouragement for the author as they seem to be... indisposed at the time.
  I think you should keep as you are and every 10 or so chapters just move the brackets in the author notes at the top as I think it is a good idea to inform people of the stuff you introduce if they are keeping pace and the every ten change would allow those who find them annoying to just binge read it at certain intervals.
  Really hope you will come back to us and continue.
  ~Sincerely,
  Deathknight A. Dread
• pewpewcachooRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Writing was good, story was okay and different then a normal summoned hero story. Grammar is good also. The MC is likable and has some funny moments. I don't care for the little girl but it is what it is. I guess I just don't like the little girl troupe.
• Grimmhound13Royal Road

  ★ 0.5

  barely made it past the Loli tag along introduction its something to read at best.