Living as a tree in a world ruled by numbers

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Starting to rewrite, I hope to have a chapter out by wed.

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  • NineHeartsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story has a good start. Some spelling errors, but those are easy to correct. Has a chance to develop into something extraordinary. While it is similar to Tree of Aeons, it seems unique enough to develop into a different branch of the same story type. The only suggestion I have is to maybe make the class nature/tree related and not just prince (that seems to be untree like). Additionally, unless you are making the tree lean towards something besides being a tree (like adding another element [l liked the blood moon {demon tree?}] summoning anything not related to nature seems a little weird). That being said, I still love the start and hope you continue even if you ignore everything I said; after all, you are the one writing.