Limbo

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Description

Story of the seven children that had died of the third world war and landed on the land between heaven and hell, the Limbo, with no memory from their past. From here, they are judged on their actions from the past and is taken to either hell or heaven. From here on, the rest of their eternity seemed peaceful, but the afterlife was something way different to what they had imagined. An adventure story of the seven young souls that landed in Limbo, will they be able to regain their memories? What is the truth behind their death and the Limbo?

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Namui0312

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Views: 397

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Community Reviews(1)

Ian JagerRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I'm still just two chapters in, so don't take my word for it.
The writing in general is a bit clunky, and scenes tend to shift from fast-paced to crawlingly slow within a single paragraph. Despite these issues, there is a promising core idea and actual originality. The latter is a rather rare quality that I hope the author continues to polish.
I am rather surprised at the lack of ratings and followers, though the easy answer is that the majority of readers on Royal Road tend to focus on LitRPG and cultivation fictions rather than anything else.
Keep it up, keep it steady, and keep improving!