Life Sucks, Then you Die
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Average to not average. More of a story about living, not an action rebirth thing. Remember the three assured things, Life, Death, and Taxes.Enjoy! Feel free to comment.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- baileymitchell
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 14
- Views
- 4,795
Chapters(4 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- ManodudsRoyal Road★★★ 2.5I am afraid that your story might be a little rushed on the details, and so fast that I often lose myself in the pacing.Slow down a bit,please. The characters feel quite flat, and honestly speaking, they would need a bit more development before we can call them characters, rather than side-characters.
One of the best saving points in the story, honestly speaking, is the grammar.I am not a major in English, and in fact, it is not even my first language, but I admit, I have seen many works that have worse grammar than yours.
Overall, you shouldn't give up on writing, but at the same time, there is a lot of room for improving.