Life of a person who was transported into another world

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Rei was just an ordinary student on earth. He was just wiping his sweat from his forehead while listening to his professor’s ramblings about algebra. When suddenly, his body stopped moving and time seemed to stop for him. He tried to get up, but his efforts were futile, and minutes later, he lost his consciousness. He wakes up and finds himself in the same classroom, however, what strange is that chunks of bloody meat were littered on the floor. Follow Rei and his adventures as he tries to explore this new and fascinating world.--First time writing. Wish me luck!

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: crawwl

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Rating: 2.3/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 24,993

Chapters(16 total)

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angryfanRoyal Road
★ 1.0
The chapters in the story don't seem to be a part of the same story. This is because you leave out important details about why the chapter is related to the story you are telling. Like all the chapters about the castle can be skipped because we don't know if it is in the past or the present or even how it relates to the MC. You also did not try to describe anything about the MC at all. Like when the MC opened the shop in chapter 4 but didn't bother to tell us what was in the shop and just acted like it was something amazing in it until chapter 11 when we found out it was just food and water, or when do failed to describe the history or personality of the character. You also tend to end every chapter in a cliff hanger do you know how annoying that is? There is so much wrong with this story I wouldn't recommend anybody read this.