Life in the Aftermath

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Description

It's been ten years since the portals opened and monsters poured out to destroy the world as we knew it. Humanity has fought long and hard to rebuild to what it once was, but this time thanks to the powers bestowed upon them they have built a society even stronger than before as there is also a new class of humans who sole job is to journey beyond the portals and bring back riches and treasures.

But not all is well as beyond the portals lie a whole new world filled with monstrous creatures and deadly worlds just itching to devour.

Join our MC as he fights for his place in this new reality and discovers just what caused his whole life to change.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2025
Author: Forsakenneel

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Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 22
Views: 12,590

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Ricky the World BuilderRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I like the idea behind it, but unfortunately I can't get past chapter 2. I won't give a terrible review for a story I haven't read, but I will point out my few issues.
There's just a lack of grammar. Many sentences just keep going with no punctuation, encompassing 3 or more separate things. That made it really hard for me to read in general.
Next the characters are overly expressive. I've seen alot of ways to drop information for the reader. a character thinks it, answers a question about it, asks a question, discovers it, or just over hears it. What throws me off is a character yelling it in a public place. maybe it's a pet peeve. it's not for me, but the concept is interesting and I wish the author the best luck