Lich God Deidre

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Description

Twenty-five-year-old office worker, Deidre, is killed after getting T-boned from a drunk driver. She gets dragged away from the normal afterlife by an unknown force and is instead reincarnated as the Lich God.

Deidre, dying with lots of regrets, now tries to live her new life by fulfilling all the things she didn’t get a chance to do previously. However, as the Demon King, Fyren’s plot is revealed bit by bit, she learns that the nice life she tries hard to get used to might not last forever.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: JAGuppy

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 66
Views: 48,821

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PhoenixFlareRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
On the whole, it's alright, but there's a distinct lack of detail. The grammar is largely good, but there seems to be no real emotional descriptions or elaboration on anything. It's very 'I did this and then I did that, and then X did Y' in terms of writing. There's little flavor and not a whole of lot natural worldbuilding.
If I can, I would recommend that the writer refrain from trying to frame everything in a 'I did this' method. Try explaining events with a bit more flair, use more metaphor and simile, perhaps some exaggerated comparisons. Take more than a sentence to describe an event or a person in order to let the readers gain more insight. It's got some good potential, it's just very dry so far.