Lia and Lara will seek the One Piece

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Now it's already the third round for the strange chicken loving being that was called Clair, Dexter and Kara. What will it do if it has the chance to roam the world of One Piece? And will it be able to hold on to its love of Kurama? Will the Straw Hats be their enemy, their ally or is there maybe no connection to them at all?

Follow it and see how it builds its own crew and sails the Grand Line, leaving chaos and doing questionable things on her road to the One Piece. But remember, only one thing is sure, there will be chicken!

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Yeah, my third story, if you exclude the one shot^^. Hope I won't struggle with a good end, as I have with the others.... But be warned, there is a high chance that I will have to place it on Hiatus for some time. But that won't happen until I reach the current One Piece storyline. And maybe I will kill them off somewhere along the line, remember the Grand Line is dangerous^^.

The cover is made by NBadonK, and remade by OnLin3. The size was not matching RR's standards....

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Kestix

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 1,883
Views: 2,332,110

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Community Reviews(10)

Anthor47Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Thanks to you for all these incredible fanfictions! : D
BoogeymanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I just wish to have more updates per week cause it's just too damn good.
Death GodRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
all in all i really enjoy reading this story and hope it continues. This story and the naruto one inspired me to start writing and coming up with plans. For my own stories i haven't posted anything yet, but i just want to say this is a great story to read and i hope it continues hopefully becoming longer than the dexter naruto story.
p.s. I am also saying this to hopefully get more people to read an enjoyable story. Also i hope this story can inspire more people to write stories of their own.
Thanks for the story Kestix and please continue with it, please don't put it on hietus like so many other writers do to their stories.
DotloveRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Very enjoyable to read and all the characters are very well developed specially Lara, All the characters feel neseccary and interesting to read about. I would be ready and happy to branch out a bit more from the original storyline of One Piece, allthough ill enjoy the story either way!
NexionRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I love you and your work
<3
please more chapters
<3 <3 <3
Esta novela sería grandiosa como las otras, estoy realmente emocionado por ver que nos deparas y estoy infinitamente agradecido por lo que nos ofreces
saludos desde Perú
kuroshikiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Yay! Finally it's here! Btw i love all your novel starting from the first clair!
Crimson_ElixirRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Good world to write your fanfic about. But too much rant and the constant change of POV is really making my brain scream.
I feel like you try to convey too much in every sentence you make. Or maybe you just don't understand that not everyone has the same way of thinking.
These are the things that I find merely annoying.
To go a bit further into details why this story is not what I was expecting, I'll say I don't understand the whole point of changing worlds here.
Your Mcs are clearly those two blood thirsty gender benders. They seem to consider the rest of the world as just air and they just go along worlds thinking about how to wreck X mc or recruit B evil guy.
I don't feel any incentive for your characters to get strong, or more like they don't deserve their power.
The way abilities are chosen is on point though.
lineheartRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
As i have said all other Times. This is my oppinon, i urge all others to read the story if they have not already and form your own.
short verson of reviw is. story is worth trying. i like it so far. and it has the best start out of the other storys so far. and things look like old problems I have are on track to being fixed
I have said this before and I will say it again. Lara/Dexter/clair. is by far at there strongist when he/she is weak. usally at the start when they are a kid. I find that it is when the most Character devlopment happens. and when I like Lara the most. Mostly because it shows the human side of her. which thru out this series, there has been very examples of. and everytime that moment pops up, it ends way to fast.
I have said this before and I will say it again. I don't like Lia, and I still don't. But now she has more reason than being a plot device. And as it is now, i can learn to like her. I still wish she has less screen time, and Pov switches were used more sparingly. I can live with it as things are. But so far in the story Lia act as an outlet. instead of having Dex be the dark and brooding one now it is split about 75-25 between Lia and Lara in favor of Lia. And I don't mind that. frankly that probley was one of the best things the aruthor could, do that fits his writing style. and this fits
At the end of the day. one of my biggist probblems with Dexter was his total lack of "feeling... human." and his forced Character devlopment. because he was human, While he might of only viewed him self as such for only a fraction of the amount of time he has been alive. at his/her core, they were human and as such i viewed them as human. Lia on the other hand does not have the problem. She has never been human and being human is a new concept. something that she as a charcter has never experanced before. So her not acting as a human would and is completly with reason. and this I hope leads into charcter devlopment. with her becoming more human.
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PsirexRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I really like the other works, even though there were similar steamrolling OP characters,
I even liked Ms Chicken as a comic relief considering Dex love for the food.
But the whole chicken-island thingy got out of proportion not to mention the Rape-Plants... For me it felt like a well planned storyline got interrupted by "well lets try to take LSD and write a bad hentai scenario"...
I will maybe try to pick it up again some time
CestarianRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I manage to make it through close to 50 chapters before I had enough when Kizaru, the by far strongest admiral, is beaten by a fucking chicken that is a member of the protagonists crew (presumably the comic relief character...).
At this point, the power trip reached the same kind of levels as playing a video game with god mode, it stopped being fun, there's almost no force in the entire one piece universe that can touch our protagonists. Why? Because of their comic relief of a pet chicken.
I have no qualms about overpowered characters, but there's a limit to how overpowered you can make your characters before it just gets boring, and this story breached that limit.
What is the point of gathering power and training montages if there are no real adversities in the world that can justify using your full power in the first place?
The protagonists, while strong, shouldn't be anywhere near kizaru's level (and they know it), but their pet chicken can kick his fucking ass... Which would make their pet chicken a fighter at the same kind of level as gol d roger or sengoku, whitebard and shanks. (Whitebeard being commonly referred to as the strongest man in the world...)
This never semeed to be a very serious story, but considering the apparently edgy and depressing backstory behind the protagonists, I expected it to be something more than just Lia and Lara steamroll through everything.
The story is your average power fantasy, the style is your average power fantasy style, the grammar has a few holes in it but is legible, the story seemed to be heading down an ok path until a certain chicken was introduced to it, there are very few original characters in the story, the one piece character copies are fairly true to their original selves but there's nothing special going on in this department.
Our protagonists are actually mostly evil, but for some reason gather a crew of goody two shoes and put on a facade around them... Yeah I don't know, this stuff looked somewhat promising a