Leveling Up Is Better Than Reality
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If you've ever been called a slacker, you know, it's not that you're lazy, it's just that you're not interested. Your values don't allow you to work hard as you wish to live in a heaven-like world where you don't have to do anything. As Gandhi said, ""Be the change you wish to see in the world...'' Wise words indeed. This story's about lazy- I mean an idealist hero named Zellin living in an RPG-like world. I'm going to deem this work as PG-13, but you never know...
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2016
- Author
- jaahn11
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 123
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- 5,333
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(6)
- jaysonlaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I love the first chapter keep it coming I like that he is not crazy op lazy slacker is awesome
- wezardRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5This is a great story I wish I could read more of it. It is funny to read, it tells exactly what a lazy person would do and I love it.
By the way @Char if you think this is unrealistic try reading "Legendary Elemental Knight" I think that need a major re-write - CodexofImmortalsRoyal Road★★★ 3.0All of my opinions were expressed by ShadowWizard, basically, Please improve the characters, deepen them as much as possible. And please lower the pace of the story :)
- FlashfyreRoyal Road★★ 2.0I like the idea of the guy so into games he starved himself playing it, but you really just forgot his grinding mentality completely. He had all that intelligence as a baby and yet hes still behind some random sociopath girl. It just feels poorly drafted and written as you go.
- ShadowWizardRoyal Road★★ 1.5Terrible... nice idea on this new world but story - NONE where are you going with this ??? MC -Don't even get me started with this worthless excuse of a MC his IQ is 50 at MOST dumb ass motherfucker i cant enjoy any of the chapter with this shit being in every one of them !!!!!!! Side Char - WTF these kids are 5 RIGHT ??? might as well make 25 !!! what's with the intelligence you gave them... heck there even smarter than this REINCARNATED 20+ YEAR old guy whose vocal cords could work perfectly when he was 3 months !!?(fck that its fantasy so i don't care really) Any way i don't like this coz MC has no backbone what so ever his being told what to do by some fucking kids !!! and even some 12 year old shit(girl) tried to flirt with a 5 year old(MC) so he can take care of her 8 year old SISTER i mean WTF and on top of that her sister the 8 year old one made the MC to buy her 4 spellbooks just coz there apparently friends......since when ? and i don't even know where he got all that gold since he bought 5 books for him self and 4 more for her ... plot hole ? (those books cost a lot of gold so we've been told) and one more thing can any of these guys in this world revive like that girl did forgot her name ... see theres another thing you barley give a shit about any of these characters heck even the MC is the same i'm done with this fic
- chayRoyal Road★★ 1.5this story lacks common sense and character development
those are the two major flaw
interesting setting but the lacks of common sense in the story kill it
hope you will rewrite the story