Let There Be Light
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This story is about a person who found himself in a void with no memories. After a very long period of time, he finally discovers that he has godly powers of creation. Follow along as he creates worlds and watches them grow.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Reluctant_Bear
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 52
- Views
- 14,681
Chapters(13 total)
- Chapter 13: MurderJan 12, 2024
- Chapter 12: ConsequencesSep 24, 2023
- Chapter 11: CommandmentsAug 1, 2023
- Chapter 10: DeathJul 1, 2023
- Chapter 9: A CenturyJun 1, 2023
- Chapter 8: CommunicatingMay 1, 2023
- Chapter 7: FriendMar 27, 2023
- Chapter 6: SapientsApr 9, 2022
- Chapter 5: LifeApr 5, 2022
- Chapter 4: NamesApr 4, 2022
- Chapter 3: WorldsApr 2, 2022
- Chapter 2: StarsMar 31, 2022
- Chapter 1: LightMar 29, 2022
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Community Reviews(2)
- RandomPlanet1248Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0For those who want the short version:
A slice-of-life, dungeon core on crack type of story. Incredibly wholesome and worth a read.
Now for the rest of you:
This story is basically dungeon core on crack... and I love it.
In terms of style, the pacing is definitely on point for this kind of story, with massive or miniature time skips that skip all the unimportant stuff. There are no overly vivid descriptions or unsatisfyingly long monologues. Mind you, there are monologues but that's a given for most stories, especially ones with this kind of premise.
The story is pretty nice and chill. Rather than keeping me wondering, it makes me go into autopilot mode and just enjoy it. It's not tense but in a good way. This is probably because there haven't been any deep delves into the master plot yet except for in one of the latest chapters but it's still just barely brushing the edges. Overall, I love it.
The grammar has some imperfections, unfortunately. It seems like the author is a fluent English speaker but minor mistakes still slip by them. They're only human after all. Despite this, the story is still perfectly understandable so don't let that deter you. Something I think I like to think about often is as much as the author is expected to write well and with good grammar, we, the readers, also have a responsibility to provide criticism in a constructive and supportive manner, especially to smaller authors who don't have editorial staff or proofreaders to help out. So if you see a word being used wrongly or a sentence missing a comma, consider highlighting it, suggesting an edit, and continuing reading.
Now then, onto the juiciest part. The characters! The MC is so damn nice and semi-innocent. I guess only innocent in the way that he wants the best for everyone and everything and wants them to be happy. At the same time, he's rational and has some clear boundaries that he won't cross like manipulating one's emotions or will. The side characters are well-written and relatab - ghost_of_hotsauseRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is an amazing story where we have a truly all powerful character and still making a truly intriguing and interesting story that I keep wanting more of.
The fact that the people he creates have a certain level of influence on the universe and are potentially able to become other gods is something I want to see delved into along with the sinful divinity and what happens to the planet full of it
I am really enjoying the story thank you Reluctant_Bear for writing this story and I hope you continue writing (even if it isn’t this story)