"Let's play hiding"

Town's people feel uncomfortable and say " Can't we move it to far place from here? Children don't realize and might play on it. If there's so bad energy then why don't we get rid of it? " But no one touched that, years passed...

I like a horror movie and stories. I wrote this "Let's play hiding" in February 2015 on Mongolian language, and now I wanna let you know what I wrote. Also you can fix my grammar faults.