Legionnaire

Self-Published

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Description

Welcome to Xector, a world where humans have gifts of both mana and ki. A world where humans are trying their best to extinguish monsters plaguing the land. A world where one boy's dream becomes reality. Accompany this boy in his journey not only filled with countless trials and tribulations but also romance and of course we can't miss out on crude jokes which a teenager needs.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Jinxmon

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 199
Views: 35,887

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

ggfiedRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Fantastic development and novel plot, very excited for the upcoming chapters!!!! Can't wait for your updates :)
lainex2Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
After reading the first chapter, I'm excited to see where this whole story will lead us too. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK JINX! :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON the suspense is killing me
FanFicFanaticRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Like the title says, it’s really hard to pay attention to the MC while hearing about how awesome and OP his friend is. I keep thinking more about the friend and how he got to be so strong. Either tone the friend’s accomplishments down a little, or make the MC more OP than him. Your story is above average at best, nothing new going on here. Your standard MC has goal and talent for some super exclusive role or he has a destiny. The biggest problem you face now, is that you have forced your character into only one path for growth. He has to fight the dark forces and according to the prophecy, he’ll most likely win. So there’s the end of your story. He trains, beats the Demon Lord or whatever, prolly gets the girl, lives happily ever after. No choices whatsoever to go against his destiny or try to write his own story.
jburge1Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
I like the idea of this story, but all the author does is harp on how just 'above average' the MC is, and it gets annoying. Especially considering his best friend is an elite student. All I kept thinking was, why isn't this story about him?