Legion [Unconventional Dungeon Core Story]

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Description

A veteran centurion dies after a devastating defeat at the hands of the Gauls during Caesar's campaign. Death wasn't the end but the beginning of this legend's journey.

The warrior finds himself reborn as a newly minted Dungeon Core. Using his wits and experience, he will defy the laws of nature itself, reshaping the meaning ofDungeon Coreforever.

Follow him on an Odessey of conquest, blood-shed and discovery, where apocalyptic endings are always on the horizon, and decay, and rot run rampant through social hierarchies.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2025
Author
TK_Trooper

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADSTRONG LEADGAMELITMALE LEADNON-HUMAN LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAIREINCARNATIONWAR AND MILITARYHIGH FANTASYSTRATEGYPROGRESSIONDUNGEON CORE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
194
Views
738

Chapters(1 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • Michael DuffyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Luv' me romans
    Luv' me dungeons
    Luv' me flowery language
    'ate me gauls
    'ate me status screens
    'nuff said
    nah, for real though, there's only two chaps as of writing this, the prologue and chapter 1, but I like it so far! Some people prolly won't like the more descriptive and flowery langauge, but I do, at least. Topic is cool too, how a centurion is going to react to a fantasy world.
  • Larkspur WrenRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    While I admit to being a newcomer to this genre, I can recognise passion and dedication anywhere, and it's clear that this author has them in spades. Their knowledge and research of the subject matter shines through on every chapter, making for content that is constantly engaging.
    The writing can be a bit rough in parts, but I'm heartened to see how eager the author is to receive and take on feedback. Just in the short span of the chapters I've read, there's a noticeable improvement in grammar and use of paragraph graphs to keep the action flowing. I think this bodes well for how the rest of the story unfolds, as it's in a constant state of improvement.
    The main character Cyrus is also an intriguing figure: violent and resourceful with a cruel streak tempered by moments of internal reflection. His testosterone-fuelled journey and the visceral action scenes along the way are sure to keep readers entertained.
  • Super-SonicRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I can't even read it. The author needs to learn to space badly. It seemed alright and I don't want to rate the story unfairly but it is nigh unbearable in its current state. Sentences are jumbled into paragraphs seemingly at random and form 3 or 4 walls of text per chapter.
    I hope the author spaces it a bit and I do want to be able to come back and change my review as I like the premise.
  • SpoiledSecretsRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The first 30 chapters were great, but since the second in command shows up it’s gone downhill. At this point, it is barely even worth 2 stars. The whole reason people wanted to read this was because of the Roman background, but I can see that it won’t last long. Good job wasting everybody’s time!