Legend of the Undead Sovereign

Self-Published

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Description

The heavens trembled for fear of his might,

The earth shook in fear of provoking his anger,

The immortals stood and fought...... till death,

The gods fell, and lost their divinities to the abyss,

The universe crumbled beyond repair,

Regrets followed as did a river of blood....,

All were judged under the supreme lord-THE UNDEAD SOVEREIGN!!!!!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
THE GOD OF ANIME

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICANTI-HERO LEADFEMALE LEADSUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSSTRONG LEADGENDER BENDERMALE LEADREINCARNATIONCULTIVATION

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Rating
4.0/ 5.0
Followers
112
Views
23,040

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • BlackjakasRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Still is my first time reading a story from you so if it's just your writing style sorry^^.
    Well... About Legend of the Undead Sovereign.... Not that i don't like but could you slow down a bit it would make it better.
    In every Xianxia or things like this story the story is slow and building up "Hype" but your just make it explode right away wich make it less likely for reader to continue.
    Just think a litle bit: why would she go to an Academy when she have the memory an knowledge of 2 lifes time that probably lasted more than 1000 since she is a cultivator. Lost 1 because of the pill.
    Maybe she just want to be with friend like you said but there is other better mean to archive this goal. And don't give too much power to the MC from the start, the story will be very boring after she became unbeatable.
    Trie to make it so the MC encounter a pet or things like that: a companion who could batle with her.
    I want to be kind so i will say it from the start: You're story has a bad start.
    Not enough details, no big desciption, the MC has a too brigh personality for some one who batled trough war, bloody batle and as seen his now her friend die.
    If it's normal then explain it.
    AND JUST FOR ME: MOAR CHAPTER!!!
    This was a helping (trying to be kind) massage from me to help you a bit more. don't think too much about what i asked just do whatever you want and continue writing your story!
    Oh Right! I'm French sorry if i mispelled some word or writed bad grammar. It's self learned English.
    This is my own opignon so if you don't like what i'm saying then dislike this if not then like.