Legend of the Rule bender.

Self-Published

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Description

Thimon Mayor was considered the greatest bug hunter of his time, his talent in bending a games rules to achieve his goals and entertain his followers.

He would have never thought that those skills would ever be vital.

But who would expect to be thrown into an unknown world with nothing but the measly skill to reincarnate?

Watch as the Legend of the rulebender unfolds, and Thimon strives for the perfect form.

There couldn't possibly be side effects to death, right?

Every similarity companies and people talked about in this book have with actually existing entities are purely coincidental.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Rexxy

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 67
Views: 33,540

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Community Reviews(3)

Tu ShuaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Style: The author effectively incorporates tables into the novel, enhancing its visual appeal.
Grammar: While the grammar is generally sound, minor edits could improve the flow of the narrative.
Story: The story introduces an intriguing premise with Thimon Mayor, a renowned bug hunter, navigating an unknown world with the unique ability to reincarnate.
Overall, the novel shows promise with a unique concept, engaging protagonist, and visually appealing elements. Minor edits could enhance the narrative flow further.
DonekuldaRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Story has an interesting concept, and the grammar isn't bad, but it's hard to read and get your head around what is happening, sometimes it seems like there missing some paragraphs as it hard to understand some situation as they make little to no sense. Author should re-read his/hers work and fix those parts as they make very little sense.
UwUthinizationRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This story has a great concept but it is not well written.
Firstly the concept is using handicaps as an advantage or just as something irrelevant. Let's say you have a handicap that makes you less accurate with long ranged it doesn't matter then if you go melee. Or maybe a handicap where you can't lose weight and gain it faster but have a perk where fat makes you stronger and have more defense. It's a great idea.
Then we get to the main issues. Firstly the chapters are short. That's normally not a problem however at the end there's also a massive amount of his skills and such which make it seem even shorter.
Secondly, they don't have a firm concept of English. Which is fair. I don't either and it's usually such a small issue(again.) but there are so many words either used wrong or misspelled so it's just an annoyance.
Thirdly it makes no sense. There's no true connection between what the MC does and what he knows. He goes for small builds too but I can't find a reason for it. You'd think he would go for large specialized builds to start.
Finally, you have the biggest issue(IMO). The characters feel so one-dimensional. So far there's only been 3 personalities.
Oh, and it's constant fighting which can be good but it's not that kind of story(again imo.) this is more of a story where it should be focusing on how they exploit rather than what they exploit with. This is all my opinion however and I do recommend you read it just to form your own.
I think the author can make this a pretty good story. It has potential.