Legend of Pino - (A realistic ancient kingdom builder and warfare novel)

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Description

A young man from the 21st Century is dropped into the body of an injured and abandoned 16 year old boy. Through the memories of the boy, the man finds out he has somehow been transported to the times before civilization. The times before medicine, proper housing, and a consistent supply of food and human aid. How will the modern man survive in the times before civility? Introducing: Legend of Pino

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Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Kofu_

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 234
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Community Reviews(5)

Lil_crafterRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I haven't seen a story like this in a long while so having such an in-depth view into ancient times with an MC that has to learn and struggle to live is a great retreat from the litrpgs that control the website. The clan relations and past of Pino are slowly being revealed to us in other povs and dream sequences while following Pino and his struggle to live.
But what holds this together the best is the Authors willingness to change and update his story as they learn what to improve. Each update brings a smile to face as I know it will be better than the last and eventually, the old chapters will be just as good. Thanks for the story!
Lily Fhon AzhelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Currently only read up to chapter 5, but I do see the potential
The author crafted a wonderful survival situation and also a background to the character.
It feels like a genuine survival story, with struggles that other stories often doesn't address. Things that contribute to the survival of someone.
I often see survival stories depicting the survival of their characters with convenience and easy power, never telling the real struggle. But this one is different, it shows how difficult it will be to survive, how harsh survival really is for the character within.
About the character, I don’t think I can say much about the character at the moment, but I'll edit this once I read more future chapters. All I can say is that i like the character.
It however is not perfect, it leaves much to be desired, but it have the potential to be a good story.
I'll leave a 5 star review for now, but I'll edit this review when I read more about the story and more to add or change on this review
Give it a try, you might like it or you might not, but give it a try.
karmicwillRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
If you're a fan of immersing yourself in a tale that transports you back to tribal times, then this novel is an absolute must-read!
As someone who thoroughly enjoys exploring alternate history and delving into tribal civilizations, I often find it challenging to come across captivating stories that fall within these categories. However, this particular story has undeniably struck a chord with me.
The grammar within the narrative is impeccable, allowing the story to flow seamlessly. Any concerns about errors disrupting the reading experience can be put to rest.
One aspect that truly shines is the depth of the characters and their introspective musings. They come across as vividly three-dimensional, complete with emotions that are relatable and easily comprehensible.
Despite there being only 21 chapters available at the moment, I'm inclined to rate it a perfect 10 out of 10. My hope is that the story maintains this exceptional quality as it progresses further.
MossbeeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
OK so firstly, I think the grammar is phenomenal it's essentially perfect I have no issues there.
The characters are solid thus far and I appreciate that the mc is struggling in this survival based story. Along with the mc needing to learn how to do things to survive.
The setting is nice, and seems well thought out.
Having a whole separate language is interesting though it can be confusing. Thankfully the words are explained so it's not too difficult.
Edit due to the original point now being inaccurate: the story is strange yet I find it intriguing. It's good for the most part I think it packs a fair bit of suspense because of the dual perspectives present in the story, but there's still a little mystery on what will happen to the mc in the future. The story gets a 4 star rating for now, it's good and has potential but I'll reserve my actual judgement till after the first arch.
Other than that it's a great read and I hope it continues, I've been waiting for a kingdom builder from this time period for an age and here it is. I will edit it at a later date if I deem it necessary.
KindreadzRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
i read 9 chapters so far and it somewhat reminds me of the serie The Clan of the Cave Bear minus the whole time travel/reincarnation part. it might seem a bit slow but i think it just highlights the world building. there is no system assistens that you see in other reincarnation novels which is a plus as it shows the struggle and progress of a modern person in a pre-historic time