Lazy Ash

Self-Published

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Description

Ash just wants to stay home,play video games, and maybe watch some porn.Its to bad fate has something else in store.Well... maybe just bad luck.Ash is going to be forced to do things he thought hed never have to do. Like Dear God Work!Followed by an annoyingly good natured battle angel and a kitsune who most definitely is not a demon.Ash's lazy days are being slowly but surely destroyed.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Kaimcc

Tags

ACTIONCOMEDYSCI-FISUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERS

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
1,356
Views
1,156,195

Chapters(82 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • Siler50Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hey I really loved this story I’m sad you stopped writing it! Yes I was annoyed with how women ruled his life and thought it was rushed how he moved on but it’s your story so Wright how you want, still loved it furring and after that part.
  • musakoRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is one of those where you either like them or you dislike them. I happen to be one of the persons that personally love this story. I have it set as one of the websites that automatically open whenever I open my browser. I love this story due to it blending in several different things that I love. Videogames, mythology and other similar stuff. The MC always managing to crack me up. The story becomes better later on when more girls become involved with the MC. While it might feel a little stereotypical the way the author manages to still make me crack up is outright impressive. I believe that most people will find this to be a refreshing fanfic compared to more serious ones.
  • CrimsonSamaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is one of the funniest stories I have read on this site. Nothing else to say except to read it and enjoy every line.
  • FlashfyreRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love your story, the twists keep me on my toes often enough that it doesn't give enough time to the reader to feel dull.
    Great writing, best regards
    Flashfyre
  • TotemRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The overall lazy nature in which this protagonist excretes is well above any mere mortal and provides good humor as well as action to the story itself. However, use this novel as a means for polishing your skills as a writer and storyteller. It brings happiness to us readers when we see novices become masters of their craft, so please continue on with this wonderful story but remember let this first story become a base for other wonderful ideas in which you have within your mind and let it polish your skills as a writer and storyteller.
  • AldyrinRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The second revision is a big improvement.  Keep up the good work.
  • NumblenutsRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Good story by the grammar is pretty bad and the main character needs to grow a pair
  • AregadonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    I can't say much about style and grammar since both are really good and I dunno much about it.
    The story is well written the Pace is decent and the background is well made.
    But and here's the big but (atleast for me) The Character's seem like they're made out of a single big Focus which they all revolve around none of them have their own genuine Personality except for the MC which just adds the big Minus for me the MC isn't really "Big" enough to revolve around which just makes reading it that much more Frustrating for me.
    It's a good story and if you like Submissive MC's you'll definetly get you're fill here but it's just not my Cup of Tea which is just to bad for me since I really like the start of it.
    Still even tho I had to drop it I wish you the best of luck.
  • AVLRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    Style-Good
    Story-Very good
    Grammar-Good
    Charcter - worse.It may sound good for the MC to be a dog,listening to every female he sees.You suddenly got us two girls who took his virginity.Seriously,did I miss a chapter?I am not really sure.
    He befriends a random vampire he saved and gets an extra vampire.Get one vampire,you get one extra!
    I hope you don't F@CK off and add mom to harem.And Cindy...I don't get how nobody mentioned her.She
    is like a cockroach you can never get off.The Mega Force thing sounds like something a child or a teen thought off in a whim.And there is his talent,Steal.
    You did a mega mistake here!I don't get why a family with talents never tested him or told him about their secret.They Can Steal,but why does the Mc steal their heart or organs?IT would easily kill even gods?He could steal their divinity or even steal one's life.
    (And improve your language)
  • Xreaperce11xRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Lazy Ash, to me this reads like the author just cleans up his acid induced daydreams (or dirties them  lol) adds some structure and Walla sexy, comedy, action fit for nerds. Seriously I'm pretty sure I had a drunky drug-ed dream where I made a Bob god. (Only his name was kevin) This is a super lite read (adult read mind you) no real feel of seriousness to me. Just curiosity, fun and a whole lot of me nodding my head and completely understanding the train of thought.(pwn n00b$ SON........and IN ALLL SERIOUSNESS DIE SQUEAKERS) Anyway great story hope you continue it to finish, I will buy it if you do, this story has turned some of my bad days to good ones just making me laugh. Thnx