Laus Deo
Self-Published
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Description
Abigail and Elias just had the worst day of their lives: burying their parent's after their unexpected deaths. All mourning is put on hold when an irate angel appears in their house and demands their help.Humanity is in trouble. The seal on the demon kingdom has weakened and if it's not taken care of soon, well...all Hell will break loose, literally. Earth will become the stage for Heaven and Hell's eternal war.The siblings join forces with the angel, while trying to keep up with the demands of normal life.Among all this, Abigail begins to suspect their parents' deaths might not have happened the way the police report says they did.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- wedgetail
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Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 14
- Views
- 32,948
Chapters(44 total)
- Part II - 24/44 - HangoversFeb 16, 2021
- 23/44 - SydneyFeb 15, 2021
- 22/44 - RaphaelFeb 12, 2021
- 21/44 - Dial InFeb 10, 2021
- 20/44 - Harold van BommelFeb 7, 2021
- 19/44 - UniFeb 5, 2021
- 18/44 - A Strange WorldFeb 3, 2021
- 17/44 - Forced TherapyFeb 1, 2021
- 16/44 - KalvinJan 31, 2021
- 15/44 - Mirror MistJan 29, 2021
- 14/44 - Warding and Real EstateJan 27, 2021
- 13/44 - HomeJan 25, 2021
- 12/44 - RetreatJan 22, 2021
- 11/44 - AshogaJan 20, 2021
- 10/44 - Old MistakesJan 18, 2021
- 9/44 - Beyond the CatacombsJan 17, 2021
- 8/44 - ItalyJan 15, 2021
- 7/44 - A Dinner InterruptedJan 12, 2021
- 6/44 - Reality is a HangoverJan 10, 2021
- 5/44 - YasaraJan 7, 2021
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Community Reviews(1)
- zryfurnRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Overall: 4.5/5
I think the writing is really good. The problem is the setup. The first chapter, while... psychologically interesting, is narratively boring. This might be a good intro for an actual completed novel. But for a webnovel, it feels like it's lacking a hook. There's no cliffhanger, no real suspense. The chapter kind of just ends. If part of the second chapter, where Ramiel appears, is in the first chapter, I think people would be much more inclined to continue reading. If I'm being honest, I would have dropped after chapter 1. Having read the other chapters though, it's a really good story. Interesting characters, interesting plot. So, like I said, my main takeaway would be to add a hook to chapter 1.