Last Train

Self-Published

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Description

At the train station, amid the rumbling of the last night train, their once shrouded paths met.  One was looking for love, the other was seeking freedom. At the train station,one uncovers a web of lies, deceit, and heartbreak. Everything that binds and looses them will lead back to the train station where they met.

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Status
Completed
Year
2018
Author
tenkouken

Tags

DRAMASHORT STORYMYSTERY

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3.5/ 5.0
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2
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645

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  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    The set up here was a bit confusing at first. The opening has a lot of interesting words that give a very different feeling than the rest of the piece. Shortly after establishing the scene it shifts to italics that has a different tone and voice that feels more in line with some TV-drama narration before cutting back, and dipping in again to this voice. It becomes inconsistent as the pieces are put together and while the mystery is resolved - its voice is inconsistent. Betty and Sean have a moment and the conclusion hits hard. It is good, but using narrative tricks and changing perspective was a bit confusing.