Last Page_(Revised)

Self-Published

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Description

As Jeanne reached the end of her book, an unexpected incident happened that turned her life upside down.

Information

Status
Completed
Year
2024
Author
Patzgeraldt

Tags

FEMALE LEADSLICE OF LIFESCHOOL LIFESTRONG LEADGAMELITSECRET IDENTITYSHORT STORYPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAILOW FANTASYKINGDOM BUILDINGWAR AND MILITARYHIGH FANTASYVILLAINOUS LEADCYBERPUNKGENETICALLY ENGINEEREDMYTHOSCONTEMPORARYWUXIATIME TRAVELTECHNOLOGICALLY ENGINEEREDDUNGEON CRAWLERATTRACTIVE LEADSTEAMPUNKHARD SCI-FI

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Rating
1.5/ 5.0
Followers
1
Views
341

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Community Reviews(1)

  • RznRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    The author says this is revised and then reverted it back in the comments, but the title is still indicating it is the revised version. I do not know if it is or isn't. The disclaimer at the beginning seemed unnecessary and did not seem to be an actual part of the piece. The story itself is written with prose that has some stumbles and punctuation errors, but it tells a basic narrative well enough. The story felt like it was more or less going through the motions and not connecting to the reader. It stumbles because it is reactionary.
    What I do not like about the piece is that it deliberately uses a ton of tags that it definitely has no connection to. Dungeon Crawler, Gamelit, Steampunk, Kingdom Building?! As of this review at least 10 different tags are not relevant at all.