Last Grace: The Apex of Another World

Self-Published

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Description

The light of Heaven fell a millennium ago, the fallen betrayer then is crowned Hells king. The Devil grew bored and rebellious, now a monster is let free. Compelled not to prior bonds of purity but to villainy, the primordial enigma is destined for greatness on the road to the pinnacle. His long forgotten connections that were never granted now on an ever distant peak. One that he had to now climb in a mortals lifetime in a world too far apart from Earth's grim reality.

The MC is Evil, with that there are many topics that are considered dark in it.

(Slavery, Sexual Content, Mind Control and Death.)

The cover was made with resources that are free to use that I found online.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Anime-Sensei

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 121
Views: 119,472

Chapters(35 total)

Reviews

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Community Reviews(7)

DaeTheDruidRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well the character might not be original it does have an interesting perspective that most do not usually try to introduce. Thus far into the story -chapter 8- it seems to be lacking in game mechanics which is expected. However I had the impression of Minecraft from the constant farming from food and collecting resources. I would suggest a loot system be implemented and a tabke declaring when you gained an item(s).
LoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I enjoy the story. It is rather simple and obviously no masterpiece (yet), but this story is still very enjoyable so I gave 5 stars to help you out.
Now, time for the real review.
Style [3.5 stars]: Things flow fairly well and it doesn't seem confusing or forced, but it's still a bit choppy at times. It might be wise to further describe things in my opinion.
Story [4 stars]: I personally really like the story so far despite its lack of depth. Not much has happened besides several system updates, the way you update this is very well thought out by the way, and an encounter with goblins. However, as I said, I enjoyed this.
Grammar [4.5 stars]: Generally good, very few mistakes or clunky sentences.
Character [2 stars]: The only real character up to this point is the main character and I like him, but he's one-dimensional. add a few more emotions and aspects to him, then add a few characters and you're good as far as I'm concerned.
Overall, worth a read, but give the author some slack. All mistakes can be fixed when it's related to writing, or so I believe.
XuzoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Litrpg could be added to your tags, anything with a system kind of falls under the umbrella.
Interesting idea in a totally aware, previously OP character crossing over into a weakened state. I hope you don't use it as an excuse to bull rush through the development you've got building!
Only complaint is that the writing style feels too formal for a story, though if you build it in as the MCs age affecting his thought process it will work out awesome.
Too early to get a real grip on the character but it seems promising for future development.
Good luck author, looking forward to your progress!
MadHat3rRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
This deserves a chance to prove itself, Grammer is decent story is kinda original but there isn't enough to see if the author will do some thing big yet, MC is meh but again it's early in the story, the only thing this story realy needs is more meat on its bones so it can be properly criticised.
P.S. I think the last sentence of the synopsis is supposed to be "All while otherworlders trickled in through..." but I might be wrong.
Feral.QueenRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Good story, really interesting idea. I definitely wanna see where it's going and how it goes.
I don't have much to say as far as critique. Sometimes they way you word things feels a bit redundant. I think you could do just as well with fewer words and more direct phrasing. And the dialogue was a little confusing in a few places, if it's the same person speaking, you don't need to start a new paragraph. If it is a different person, maybe be a little more specific who is speaking.
I will be following this to see how the story continues!
loregramRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
Concept is interesting, however, the way it is currently written takes any fun out of reading it. The point of view, may be in 3rd person, but if sounds as if the author keeps trying to go back to first person creating confusion as to what is being talked about and making the wording very awkward.
Story, honestly I can't really say there is a story other than "I want to be number 1"
There are a lot of Grammer mistakes and awkward sentence structures reducing readability.
Character is one dimensional... Just seems angry randomly, and we're not really told why half the time.
OsbornRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Alright, nice try. First experience writing a story, and rather young I'm guessing. You did good. Now it's time to erase this whole piece of crap and make a new story. Lol.
No, really, there is nothing worthy of praise here. The story sucks big time. The mc is a giant asshole. He is also completely delusional and far too inmature. He is supposed to be Lucifer! And yet his thinking is completely retard.
I wish you luck in your next story.