Lanuleta University: A World of Magical Science and Strange Connections
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Description
In a world where magic and science go hand in hand, the students of Lanuleta University face challenges beyond just term papers and quirky roommates.Miguel Reyes, a freshman at the prestigious universe for the scientific study of magic, has a voice inside his head. Not because he's going crazy, though he feels like it some days. He has a deficiency of primary magical ability with the mysterious voice as his only sign of magical aptitude. In this world, most people develop an innate, primary magical talent and then need to study hard for the possibility of a secondary one. Stuck with a seemingly-useless talent, he feels even more pathetic that the cute girl in his Psychology class with mood-ring hair, Nasira Jafri, has no interest in talking to him. However, a series of creepy and unexplained events will force them to work together and learn about one another.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2020
- Author
- MajorKerina
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 18
- Views
- 7,287
Chapters(8 total)
- Lanuleta University: Part 8 - Where It EndsDec 14, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 7 - Where The Truth Is RevealedDec 13, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 6 - Where Memory Is ConcernedDec 12, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 5 - Where I Get To Know MoreDec 11, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 4 - Where Everyone Is FemaleDec 10, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 3 - Where Things Start To Get ComplicatedDec 9, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 2 - Where I Have Plenty To Think AboutDec 8, 2020
- Lanuleta University: Part 1 - Where I 'Wow' the Ladies With My CharismaDec 5, 2020
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Community Reviews(1)
- FaercesRoyal Road★★ 1.5What this story does well is bring forth this genuinely intriguing premise, and with it an incredibly strong potential story but ultimately stumbles in multiple departments trying to get it off the ground.
This doesn't feel concise, running from one idea to another and doesn't really follow along a primary story structure but rather roams around from one plot point to another.
This also is not helped by the poor prose and formatting. Cleaning up grammatical errors and changing up the delivery could change the emotional impact of many scenes to be much stronger than they currently are.
This story has a lot of heart poured in, but trips and falls over itself trying to actuate on those ideas. Perhaps in the future, when the author wants to potentially do a rewrite, this can be improved upon.