Labyrinth Of Puppets

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

Small-san

• Chapter 10: Part 3
  Jan 5, 2016
• Chapter 10: Part 2
  Jan 5, 2016
• Chapter 10: Valstrath: Lower Levels Part 1
  Jan 4, 2016
• Chapter 9: Valstrath Part 3
  Dec 26, 2015
• Chapter 9: Valstrath Part 2
  Dec 20, 2015
• Chapter 9: Valstrath
  Dec 19, 2015
• Chapter 8: Pretty Boy’s Dilemma Part 2
  Dec 17, 2015
• Chapter 8: Pretty Boy’s Dilemma
  Dec 11, 2015
• Chapter 7: Malevolent Part 2
  Dec 11, 2015
• Chapter 7: Malevolent Part 1
  Dec 9, 2015
• Chapter 6: A Prayer; An Awakening Part 2
  Dec 7, 2015
• Chapter 6: A Prayer; An Awakening Part 1
  Dec 6, 2015
• Chapter 5: Level 2 Part 2
  Dec 4, 2015
• Chapter 5: Level 2 Part 1
  Nov 27, 2015
• Chapter 4: Christopher Noire
  Nov 26, 2015
• Chapter 3: By Marrieta’s Will Part 2
  Nov 24, 2015
• Chapter 3: By Marrieta’s Will Part 1
  Nov 23, 2015
• Chapter 2: The Freshman’s Den First Floor Part 2
  Nov 22, 2015
• Chapter 2: The Freshman’s Den First Floor Part 1
  Nov 20, 2015
• Chapter 1: Welcome to Rosetta!
  Nov 19, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• ChappyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall
  It's a great story, but damn it can be dark at times.. almost suffocating at times, otherwise really well written.
  Style
  As you've been reminded by one of your readers on the latest chapters, at times there is a lack of descriptive text.. mostly involving characters, it is hard to imagine how they look at times. Otherwise I'd personally say near perfect, really well balanced descriptive text vs conversations. Also personally I love how there is small flash-backs and that we get to see some side stories now and then.
  Story
  As I mentioned, can be really dark and suffocating at times, but otherwise really well written.
  Grammar
  Is there any problems? I was too absorbed in the story to realize any errors?
  Character
  I like the characters, they seem to have personality and charisma, and at time be hypocrites.. which I believe is quite normal? If you think reality, who isn't a hypocrite at times?
• Gizmo550Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  BLUF (Bottom line up front):
  As of now there isn’t enough material to give a complete review, that said this story starts off very well effectively captivating any reader that enjoys a fantasy medieval setting.
  Style:
  The author uses a very simple style.  There are a few parts where there are short “flashbacks” while other things are happening.  So far it has had one time jump to tell of the MC’s past.
  Story:
  As far as I can tell, not a single event in this story can be considered cliche.  That said, I have seen similiar plot and events from what I’ve read.  (That just says I read too much)
  Grammar:
  I have yet to find a grammar error.
  Character:
  The character development is awesome.  Who says a young  boy can’t do undergo arduous training to become a proud knight and leader, then throw it away in a sudden sense of justice?  By the way, I have a new found respect for this author because it’s all realistically portrayed within the realities of the setting.
  To those that read this, I bid you good day.
  This was made upon the completion of Chapter 6: Part 2.
• Fury1997Royal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  Reminds be of everything I hate about Royal Scales and The Damned.
  GG rip surrender at 20 characters.
  And then people that are brought into the story only to show that they can do literally nothing to change absolutely anything?
  KK
  This is my opinion and people that didn't like either or both of the stories mentioned before probably won't like this.