Knight & Condemned

Self-Published

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Description

The Kingdom of Altria has the finest cities and the finest academy for Knights and Mages that prepares them to battle the monsters that lurks the overworld. With the Overlord of the Northern Continent craving for expansion, the Kingdom of Altria and the other Kingdom's has to defend themselves.

This is the Tale of Arden the Lowly Commoner,And Sena Saclea of the Noble House of Saclea.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2017
Author: fawks

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 161
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Community Reviews(5)

ZielscheibeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Do you like a char who is totally overpowered, slap faces for breakfast and awes every person.
Stop right here, turn around and go to where you come from.
The male mc has a tragic past, because of that he has a little tick, that he want to help people without regards for his own wellbeing.
I would say the story is settlet in the dark fantasy sektor and it has a touch of the drenay saga. This is a personal opinion of me.
I will not wright more here, because i hate to spoiler.
Read it yourself
Zombie UnicorneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
But the grammar is super subpar.
The elements are all there but it's a shame that the grammar is holding this story's true potential back.
JormungandRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Nice opening act! Cant wait how u weave this story! For those who has taste for dark fantasy/ tragedy/ unexpected story try this!
BullerRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I have to be honest in this review. While reading this, I didn't truly feel any spark. The style, tensing decisions, sentence structure, and overall pacing just didn't work for me. Especially the tensing. Really do need to mention that one twice. I just couldn't get behind it, no matter how much it might be okay grammar-wise.
The story is okay enough, but it didn't really bring me back up to good levels of enjoyment. 4/5 from me.
gnarlytreemanRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
Repetative simple explaination, author expects the reader not to understand the mood and simply explains the situation without good story narrative. Incohesive storyline. Unrelated stories, and a main character is broken as a character, ie he does not learn from mistakes. Really makes the reading intolerable. Review written after reading chapter 80.