Kira's second life
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Kira accumulated a great deal of good karma on a planet similar to Earth. She died and met Celestrion. He is her guardian angel and he is also the most senior guardian angel. Because of that and her good karma from her previous life, he was able to help her in her next life. She requested and got, a living System, an A.I. who considers her top priority, Celeste, her memories from her last life, and several other great benefits. Now what will she do in her next life?
Just a warning I am writing htis for school so updates may be irregular and the length is not guaranted. I will tell you if I am dropping it. If so, I will tell you what the plan for the remian of the story is. Each chapter will be a page or two probably. I will not leave you on a big lciffhanger, but a minor one may end up. Please give me your advice, but I may not use it. Enjoy!
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- Hiatus
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- willk
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- SedactiveRoyal Road★ 1.0I just typed a massive comment on chapter 2 when i was halfway tru the chapter.
As i already got fuuuuuu up before finishing said chapter i had to rant.
But yea so after i ranted i wanted to at least finish the chapter..... pls dont get me started it got far worse its like a dream within a dream within a dream ubber bullshit.
I was ranting before because the Mc wakes up after reincarnation????
Suddenly starts spouting nonsense to her parents like what and they return her talk,didnt she just get born whaaaat is going ooooon?
This was around 30 sec into the chapter so i made a comment about how utterly confusing this all is.
When i finished the other part of the chapt i didn't think the author could screw it up even more titles like coiling dragon gets dropped out of nowhere.
The Mc is not someone from our world but for some reason she starts fan boying coiling dragon out of nowhere.
The parents that just showed up were a simulation like what?
OR WERENT THEY??? if i cannot even be sure of this overdosed dudes writting how can i be sure of the errors in it.
Pls fix your novel like i said in my comment on chapter 2 this is by far the most confusing novel i have ever read.
Its a crime to call it a novel as your really just mashing several things together which dont mingely really well, like oil and water.
Instead you got a toddler and a campfire they dont mix wel either but the first looks somewhat nice while the 2nd is a nightmare made real.