Kingdoms Online

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[Kingdoms Online] the all new virtual reality game AI administered through the expansive world Gods, has just been released.Rick Stryker lifetime gamer and a current college student had been looking forward to this day. As a former USMC Combat Engineer and currently attending college for architectural engineering [Kingdoms Online] will allow him to merge his passion for gaming with his career skill set.[Kingdoms Online] is a [VR] MMOPRG allowing players to band together or work solo to build a kingdom from the ground up. Allowing one to be a good leader making alliances and trade deals or rule with an iron fist over your subjects and neighbors.Purchase land and gather the resources, start your own settlement defend and build try to catch the eye of one of the world's gods to help guide your own unique path as you rise to rule.How will you rule? Will your kingdom spread to the horizon and reach for the skies, or will it fall to be forgotten by history like the other scattered ancient ruins found across the lands?Journey along with Rick Stryker's adventure as he sets out to make his claim to rule in the vast wilderness of [Kingdoms Online].

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Termax

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 946
Views: 565,215

Chapters(45 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

RoknarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Excellent, am throughly enjoying this story. Hoping you will continue with this level of competance. This is one of the best stories I have read in a while. Looking forward to more of the same. Btw if you haven't figured it out, I reallly really like this story. Mroooooaaaarr please.
ZanthaVRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
loving the story so far. Really enjoy all the detail put in, the images and spoilers.
mikefjamesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Enjoying the story so far, in some stories the constant stat increase screens and game updates can put you off, but here they have more of a context within the storyline, which helps. Grammar could do some work but overall enjoying it so far. keep it up.
Arashi ZarosRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
[a message for some other reviewer:how far have you read this novel ? (just wondering,because you may miss some part) ,although some part you are quite right but the other bad is also not so right,and the gold the mc mine ?,he do run out of it at chapter 18~20 if I am remember,and you should read until chapter 20 because some the most thing that you guy may feel a plot hole is resolved at that chapter (like the publisher have nefted the rune a bit by make it need a crystal as a battery to keep them running,and I think there are other thing,but I forgoted =.= ) ,and indeed that the mc is quite a bit like godmode in some part,but the other part he still deserve it since he do know how to apply thing and take advance of it , and there still a lot of very good crafting thing here that history accurate and some good invention he make with the rune here like this,spoiler:
and don't forget the "LENGTH" of the chapter,it begin more and more longer (and holy crap,at chapter 22 it 19000 WORDS long) ]
the talking is quite confusing if the author don't Attach name to each conversation ,after chapter 2 I have give him some link to let him learn more,but I think he still need a editor so the pacing can getting better
quick edit at 21/6:fun fact,at chapter 9 and onward the dialog are more readable now and easy to see who is talking,and for who think this is another harem,it not (for now,not sure there will be harem later),but there will be a main lover appear in chapter 12 (you can see her name aready,and at the bottom there is a picture of her)
edit:the detail and crafting stuff is reall good,the mc is decend,you should give it a try,still need a editor though
edit:wow,at chapter 8 "Spelunking for Skills",the detail of crafting and use his brain to figueout the skill and situation is very good,if you had like "Mythran's Master Of All - Continued" for the crafting,you may find this one enjoying here
edit at 6/6/2017:for who want the kingdom building part ,it begin at chapter 11
Heartbreak 117Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Interesting start.
Good grammar, no awkward line or paragraph.
Somewhat template style. But still quite good in term of story leading.
Character is ok I guess, Faith is quite a rush character and MC hit it off with her too fast.
But here is the deal if the author personal info is true:
He is an old man. He is writing this for fun. He doesn't use donation button. He is an overall normal RRL author!
So don't come in and demand a top story from a free story!
And for the author's interest, you can ignore what I said in the review.
pss2aceRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I like it so far. I have been looking for a kingdom building story and I am looking forward to following this story. The start of the kingdom building has no struggle with all the people being summoned after he found a gold vein to make coins. I think there is potential in the story and I am most interested in the progression of the kingdom.
FilthyleacherRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
So what you get in this story is a mismatch of 2 decent genres of fiction, the kingdom building and Vrmmo/gameworld styles. These 2 styles can of course mix and its not that hard. But the way the author makes the setting and has interactions make 0 sense.
Every female character the MC meets seems to atleast have a crush or is falling in love with him. The MC of course decides to flirt with all these girls like any sane person would right? No nobody would do that who had a grounded sense of reality because they are all virtual.
The VRMMO aspect of this game makes even less sense then why these fake girls are madly falling in love with him. First you have VIP accounts which are supposedly limited and very expensive. From what we are told in the begining of the story the MC is the son of a arms dealer who buy onehundred $500 guns a day, and then flips them to make a profit. The problem here is that would make only at most a couple mil a year (500*100*365) and thats if he gets 500 profit off the guns which is highly unlikely, not to mention its probably a large company that needs to pay its employees. So despite all that hes rich enough to get a VIP access which while plausible is still a bit of a stretch.
Most games these days dont have a Vip system but the ones who do usually dont give a completely insane buff. Here though you get to start the game a weak early as your first benifit. Now the odd thing here is that no one else is playing the game at the same time as the MC, the are definitely kids richer then him that would want to get in on the game so it makes no sense hes alone.
Following that the VIP system is totally p2w only if you are vip do you get access to the best races classes and even units. Not to mention starting gold.
A subject of another comment in one of your chapters someone explains how the game cannot work at all as the player just makes gold coins to get rich, as if it was so easy he could just then buy all the food in town then sell it at insane
MZeroRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The side characters are not believable and the MC seems to get anything he wants just by being nice or throwing money around. There is no work in getting to know NPC by helping them out and the way he creates things that don't exist in the game is way too easy. There are other things that just happens to be exactly what the MC wants, what stopped me from continuing the story is when he want to the farm and just because two guys decide to ignore him and treat him like a commoner, he snaps and starts shouting about how he is the chosen one and a Baron so they should treat him with respect or else. The guys he snaps at are NPC, the way the MC reacts to women and men is night and day, which is understandable to a certain extent, but the MC takes too far me. I like kingdoms building story and this one has some interesting parts to it but the characters just make it hard to read the story.
FathisRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Sorry man, I couldn't continue after the first few paragraphs - honest to god I'm not entirely sure how so many people can power through this.
You seriously need an editor.
I'm sure the story is great but for a native english speaker it just sounds really clumsy.
That said, my advice is you get an editor. Actually, just re-write it. It definitely has potential.
gnarlytreemanRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Lot of writing, but its just not of any quality, in fact its mostly horndog machoism, and instant gratifaction building for the writer. For the reader, it sucks. No idea why this showed up as a 4 star novel in the search list. Its junk, even though the grammar is ok. After chapter 20 most of the horndog stuff dissapears. There are loads of missing pictures and maps, and this detracts from the story because almost everything after chapter 20 is crafting, and a few chapters of battles. It wouldnt be so bad if the writer wrote more but the writer does not describe a lot of things.
Read until chapter 41