King: The Silver King's Echo (Dropped)

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Credits to Hanstrondheim for the cover art and Muddy and Danetello for the Synopsis!

Synopsis:

What is a King?A King is more than just a generation or a class. They are known as Kings due to the mysterious powers they wield. Their power allows them to destroy armies alone, guide their people to greatness, split mountains with their bare hands, and even kill the strongest monsters.Yet even after all these years, the origin of their powers remains unknown.A once ugly and sickly kid is transported into this world. He’s granted powers beyond his own control. He must quickly grow strong, lest he risks destroying himself as well as the world around him.His ultimate goal? To "live as long as he can". This desire, although simple, will herald his rise as the "Silver King" the world once feared.

Please ignore this. This has been dropped.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Sylverius

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Rating: 3.5/ 5.0
Followers: 7
Views: 14,672

Chapters(30 total)

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BullerRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Unrefined. This is unrefined to the point where I can not say if it has been edited or not. Mistakes bordering on major are prevalent, the way that tenses are set up utterly confused me at points, and I really cant say I feel anything for the characters except for mild annoyance of them trying to talk like human beings.
Was that harsh? I really hope it was.
Anyway, this clearly does need some work. For the style, improvements could be gained with the help of letting others read it to offer up help in some form. Or maybe just let it lie for a few days before editing it. The brain clearly needs to be stopped from forming context by itself, because the readers don't have all the background knowledge. There are points where I really just couldn't understand what was happening, and that flaw needs to be fixed.
Good try. But it needs some serious care to it. 4/5