My name, is Alex Rodgers. I have learned , grown, fought and for many years. Anyone, and everyone I have encountered has either died, or bowed. I live by my own path, and my own creed. I this life I shall know but one oath. I swear.... I will become Immortal!

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Veer_YouthaRoyal Road

★★ 2.0

This review is mainly to the author.
Before even beginning to read the story, its look of a single paragraph gives a very bad impression.
1. You use way too many commas.
2.Try to shorten long sentences into multiple small ones.
3. Put different spoken sentences into different para's , you can take reference from other novels here for this one.
4. Use " " instead of 《》 for spoken setences.
5. ALWAYS start with capital letter for names new senteses
Thats all I can see for now, Good Luck.

SphealRoyal Road

★ 1.0

I can immedantly see that the story is not very well fleshed out. The "chapters" are only the length of a paragraph, and cover the amount of story that you would expect a 2-3 page chapter to contain. Also, the formatting is terrible and makes the story twice as hard to read. The actual plot seems interesting enough, but it seems so rushed and broken that it is extremely hard to get through.

KING OF THE ELEMENTS OF POWER

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