KILLING GAME
Self-Published
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Description
Humans! Selfish humans! Im tired of seeing you destroying one of my planet.Starting today I God shall punish you, everyone of you will struggle, only the one's who have courage and strength can survive..Then shall we begin??!!!!In3.......2.1LET THE KILLING BEGIN!!!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- cursedreader
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.7/ 5.0
- Followers
- 22
- Views
- 7,297
Chapters(5 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- DanceHunterRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5Well, if the public is generally in the beginning, you can change. Well, I like your story, but I think the harem could ruin everything for me. Generally all FF bring harem girls can not come to want, that seem robotic. I hope not qeu harem harem or if the enter each from 30 chapters of difference, dessarrolladas. and if possible I hope will be 2 only, more is not better.
- infernoRoyal Road★★ 2.0I normally don't criticize one's English skills, but in this case it is destroying the story, the dialogue sounds very choppy and forced, while the narration is also very forced and sounds broken in the word choices and placement. I could also go into the punctuation usage but it normally wouldn't be that big of a deal, as it was I couldn't get passed chapter two, because the writing itself was so poor.