Kill 10 Rats

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

FlyingDutchman

• Volume 3: Chapter 4
  Nov 10, 2016
• Volume 3: Chapter 3
  Oct 12, 2016
• Volume 3: Chapter 2
  Sep 25, 2016
• Volume 3: Chapter 1
  Jul 27, 2016
• Volume 3: Prologue
  Jul 20, 2016
• Volume 2: Epilogue
  Jun 12, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 18
  May 7, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 17
  Apr 21, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 16
  Apr 7, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 15
  Apr 2, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 14
  Mar 19, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 13
  Mar 10, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 12
  Feb 25, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 11
  Feb 17, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 10
  Feb 14, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 9
  Feb 10, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 8
  Feb 3, 2016
• Volume 2: Interlude I
  Jan 30, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 7
  Jan 27, 2016
• Volume 2: Chapter 6
  Jan 24, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• phuang2001Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  What an engaging and fun story.  Highly recommend
• ThjaziRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Not an OP MC story.  Not a rich guy.   The MC feels like someone l've met before.  Not a specific someone but more of a sense of a realistic human you could have met before.  A lot of MC's are little more than sociopaths grinding away and then becoming popular due to their power in a video game.  Exactly how are they anyone's friend?  They're the kind of people you "accidentally" leave off the happy hour invitation list because none of you will enjoy it in their company.
  This MC is the sort you could share a drink with.  If he was real.
  Thanks for the wonderful read.  Hope you write more for this and Sieze the Sky in the future.
• TolackRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I just wanted to say that I like this story a lot and I don't want to see this dropped ever, so keep up the good work!  Thanks for the chapters!
• moredreadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  i love stories with the MC starting off in a bad way. please dont drop, keep writing.
• Pal5ORoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Enjoying  your work. Please give me more.
• RingostraussRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Well written, fun to read, immersive, and the game mechanics add to the story.
  Thankyou for what you've written and I hope you get the bug to continue writing it some day.  If not I am glad to read what you wrote.
• RoknarRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  One of my favorite stories on this server, Really looking forward to more.
• IgfryRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  45 playable races and you chose human.
  Just disappointing.
  Edit: I like the class. Disappointed with the race, but class is great. Have 4 stars.
• FrustratedEgoRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Lets start here, I liked it, and I recommend it as a good piece in the whole "Virtual Reality but not," style of story. Is it the best? Not without another 50 chapters - simply because it's hard to say if the quality still stay or at what point the story line will trip whatever mental triggers people have.
  So, from here forth we shall lay out the critical eye.
  The story itself starts in a very confusing way. We get the feeling of memory loss transported to another world - until we see a POV switch. At that point we learn it's really a VRMMO beta test with a machine that can mess with peoples memories. We don't get into the absolute hinkiness of this until later (Vol 2, Ch 18) - so there's that bit of 'well fork, the world is screwed, evil corporate overlord!' standard setting which irks me something fierce.
  Lets add in to that the whole PvP guild killers money equals power in game pay to win nonsense. I swear this part irks me the most. There's enough bleeding hearts out there that like, 20 people would band together and proceed to gut all people who try to rule a region. I mean really, that's got to piss people off right? Or is there just acceptance that "eh, yeah, some jerk PvP guild will try to own this" - maybe they do that in Guild Wars? I don't know! But pain hurts! Why would anyone try to own some area at the risk of virtual guttings from some sneaky assassin over and over for a month?
  Alright - logic aside. There's a few typos. Most of them are easy to bypass and don't hamper the story. There's one entire chapter where the BB code is so messed up (probably an align tag closed at the wrong spot) - and it takes the entire chapter out of the pretty black / white background and plants it on the actual picture making it impossible to read. That one is the WORST part - on a chapter that should be important with the character returning to the game after beta.
  Game play / world wise, there's a lot of fun little items thought out. I get kind of conflicted seeing all
• jlkcRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  I get what the author is trying to do but he takes it too far time and time again by ignoring logical progression for the sake of the plot. I really want to enjoy the story without having to constantly suspend my disbelief.
  Read TheSol31337's post for a more detailed review.