KEY to ABUSING the SYSTEM

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Description

The story of Jack. A human on a doomed world that lucked his way into discovering the biggest secret of the universal system. Given the keys to the system and thrown into a situation where humans are enslaved and used as tools read how he abuses every exploit he can find in an attempt to gain power quickly enough to survive those who would seek to take that wisdom from him.

First-ever story and definitely a power fantasy.

Let's see how much fun we can have with this. criticism on problems and funny "system story" exploits you can think of welcome.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Faruel

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 353
Views: 107,148

Chapters(40 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

UnOriginalRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story and style is interesting. It is distinct enough from all the other wish fullfillment power fantasy on RR but the grammar needs polish.
BastiVERoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
It's a very interesting story so far, and it's not just guy is born as a God and has super magic. It's a story of carefully balanced exploits placed in the system by the creators for their rebirth. My only few complaints are the basis for the ratings. Three stars for grammar because the story needs a good polish. There are many spelling errors, missing words and punctuation. All minor but accumulating into a bigger issue
The main issue is the cause behind the two star Charater review. There is no real dialogue, interaction is just a couple sentences of actual interaction and then a paragraph of the outcome of said talk meaning we miss out on basically everything, from Charater development to exposition. It makes it into a very dull read so far, but the world and system itself definitely makes this a good start.
The author should 100% continue writing and evolving this story. Hopefully in the future the issues are addressed because this has the makings of a very good saga.
Edit: things are moving in a very positive direction and the growth the story shows so far deems a new score. Can't wait to change this again!
IcebirdRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The story, world, etc.. are very interesting, and I want to know more.
But the lack of any dialog, the manic pace, glossed over descriptions and action scenes...
There should be at least two times more chapters! Everything is done in a few sentences, and there is NO dialog! The only character is the MC, everyone else is basically ignored, and even the princess is a blank face, having a small line to say once in a while.
For me, the story is in a severe need of a rewrite to be expanded, a lot..
Too bad, because it's still a very interesting story...
WillyHRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Like the idea, but story kinda flat. Its feel like reading a summary. No dialog, and story need more detail on action scene. Something that make reader excited. So I can only said average although I like the idea of the story