Kervet, the Oathkeeper
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
I am Kervet, the lone guardian of the Sar Varok sanctuary. I have sworn an oath that I will never leave this place. The sanctuary is the resting place of Dimas Aretin, the savior of High Larael. No evil force shall desecrate this sanctuary while I draw breath. I have my sword "Asilan" and my oath candle to fulfill my vows. This is my diary.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Bulgur007
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
- Views
- 4,141
Chapters(14 total)
- Marcham 30th, 824Jan 26, 2022
- Marcham 21st, 824Jan 26, 2022
- Saveruch 25th, 824Jan 25, 2022
- Marcham 14th, 822Jan 24, 2022
- Saveruch 20th, 822Jan 24, 2022
- Saveruch 9th, 822Jan 23, 2022
- Taleruch 3rd, 822Jan 23, 2022
- Formuch 24th, 822Jan 23, 2022
- Leverich 1st, 821Jan 22, 2022
- Zarich 18th, 821Jan 22, 2022
- Zarich 7th, 821Jan 22, 2022
- Acorach 18th, 821Jan 21, 2022
- Acorach 2nd, 821Jan 21, 2022
- Harach 11th, 821Jan 21, 2022
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★★ 3.0Doing each entry as its own chapter here is something that is not particularly reader friendly as the ads above and below are still visible even on mobile. With that out of the way, the story here is good, but it stumbles because of a lack of context and strong connections in part because the short entries tell of events that are done and does not directly describe or make sense of the situations and show us how it played out. This self-imposed restriction on the telling narrative is perhaps the biggest issue - because up until the end the story plays out without a strong grounding in the setting. That makes a wall that prevents the reader from being engrossed in the work.