Kazuki the miracle maker
Self-Published
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Description
After the events played out, He was moved to the US to start his new life.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- kazui Kaya
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 298
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- phantom890Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Ok a few things
1- its a good concept and i can understand what's going on
2- the spelling mistakes are obvious either get a beta reader or read through it
3- i cant tell weather its in the past tense or future or if its already happened like for instance here you say
The young man who was standing in front of the judge would open his eyes looking directly at the judge,
wouldn't this sound better
The young man was sitting down staring directly at the judge with remorseful, guilty eyes starig straight into the judges cold deadlooking ones
i know your new at this and all and i hope the rest of the readers dont bash me im just stating my opinion and giving you some useful advise