Judging The Creation

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Nero The Third

• Chapter 3: Missed Armageddon
  Mar 7, 2016
• Chapter 2: Abiath and Kahla
  Mar 2, 2016
• Chapter 1: Marigold of the Sunstone Village
  Mar 2, 2016
• Prologue Part 2: Curse, Help and Hope
  Mar 1, 2016
• Prologue Part 1: The Emotions of a God
  Mar 1, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• Forgiv3n324Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I believe you have a nice little story going on here.
  I think the story in itself is quite enjoyable, but since you know the main characters are the two most powerful beings in your entire story the plot probably will never be, how to say it... "exciting" I guess? I say that because the only really problems that can effect those two are their own emotions/morals. By that I mean if they felt like it they can like your latest chapter stated: An Armageddon for lack of better terms if they so desired and there is nothing anyone can do about it and their morality is the only thing keeping them from doing such. Though there cannot be any real power struggle due to their power that doesn't mean you cannot make the story interesting it will just be in a different way, kind of like how you have a slice of life thing going on right now which is just fine.
  Grammar is fine no glaring problems that I can notice, thought I have become somewhat used to the terrible grammar on this sight and might of just subconsciously ignored it if its there? (lol?)
  Characters so far seem interesting and to early to really criticize you on anything cause you could have future plans that just haven't had enough time to come to around to blossom. Though you do have a good base start of giving them character depth so I hope you continue.