Journeys of the Lost

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Description

Itinera is a world of magic. Light, matter creation and even planetary travel are all possible through the use of the Elements. But they are not always benign. Sometimes they form Dungeons. Sometimes Gods. But most of the time it is calm.

So when the largest planeshift in history is detected, all types of magic uses started feeling concerned. When it manifests as a person, they start to feel alarmed. So when it comes to light that they are one of the Lost, those who have been forcibly planeshifted from a place of no magic, they start panicking.

This is the story of Sam, who is completely oblivious to the waves he has made by arriving here. All he wanted to do was study Engineering.

The focus of this story is the exploration of the world and the magic system. Expect the occasional info dump and science tangent. The magic system is very hard and will take a bit for it to get going.

Updates whenever I finish a chapter.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2022

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
5
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1,913

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • PreistestDragonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    the first draft was a rough start with a poor exicution as to who our mc is and how he thinks and acts. HOWEVER the author adjusted and from what i am reading i feel he is doing a much better job giving us an insight into who our mc Sam is and how he thinks.
    as such i am more invested into sam as now i can start to put myself in his shoes and feel the world around him now that we have been given a basic introduction to him. not sure how to feel about most of the side characters as i dont know how relevant they will be in the story later but i have no complaints about them. though i must say still quite interested in tim the enchanter. he sounds like my kinda guy.
    we have now been hinted as to what the magic system we will be working with is like and i am looking forward to how the author will exicute what i think will be a large task since he has stated there are 21 elements with a theoretical 191 ways to combine them. sure he has said some combos just arnt useable but thats still quite the large system to try and build.
    i see the ambition, i see how things could develope, and i am looking forward to what you are going to do with this story.