Journey of an Exceed

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MC is sent to the eternal realm where he became the tenth exceed. Exceed an Omnipotence Embodiment, they create the Cosmos and the universes that fills them. Watch our MC create his own Cosmos and watch how he interact with his creation._________________________________________________________________________________________________Arc 1. Intro (ongoing)-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Mature: 18+ Sex scene (rarely though) it'll only be in the side stories, it'll be hinted at in themain storyline.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
I love OP MC

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ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYTRAGEDYSCI-FISUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOTSCHOOL LIFEGENDER BENDER

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2.1/ 5.0
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Chapters(20 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • MasuilRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i admit that I am guilty of loving OP main characters and I'm 7 chapters in. I can't help but feel cuz he is OP the pacing feels a bit rushed but overall I like it. Be careful of too much info dumping with the intro of gods, Kings, countries and important people in one universe
  • the_random_userRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE 
  • ElyasRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Seems like it might end up as a pretty cool story. I like the concept for the story and it will probably attract a lot of people who like op MCs. So far the main issues are that it seems pretty hasty and the sentence structuring isn't great. If I were to guess I'd say it's like it was written in a few hours while some of the more "professional" stories on here will be written in a day or a week in order to get a proper structure on it. This type of thing also improves with time so I hope you keep up with the story I really like it so far.
  • wraith26Royal Road
    ★ 1.0
    the author is clearly irresponsible, sigh.  what a disappointment, just becoz he said "hes bored" , he decided to ruined his own story and trolled it. just another run a mill author.
  • FanFicFanaticRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    I understand that this site is for new authors to experiment, but at least show some respect to the readers who take the time to read your story. This novel had so many things going for it, only to turn into one gigantic chuuni clusterf***. Author has no idea what they're doing and seems to enjoy just trolling the audience by springing up random BS left and right. Nothing original at all, just another power trip fantasy with some weird fetishy sex scenes to boot. OP MC became a complete a-hole for absolutely no reason, yet somehow he maintains this facade like he doesn't care about mortals while toying with the lives of so many. It's like that one kid who derives pleasure from flooding ant hills just because they can.
    **SPOILER**
    Also, the word omnipotent means having unlimited power, the mere fact that he can't foresee how making his sons the way they are would have serious consequences is something that makes no sense. Especially with the current chapter where his alter ego takes over his personality. That makes literally no sense because as an omnipotent being, he is insurmountable. He became this personality for one futa sex scene with a lesbian demon queen and somehow she suddenly becomes a separate person? With no indication whatsoever that the MC and her were ever separate existences to begin with? So many logical errors it's not even funny. I'm going with the crowd here and am dropping it.
  • AlexanderxRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    It was a good story  until the author ruined it such a shame
  • overpaladaRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    Was good not great but good them the author decide to troll his readers its really a shame that he did it