Journey into My New Life

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I was once a college student who minded his own business. That's not to say I am a coward but I just didn't involve myself with events outside of my scope of existence. That all changed when the Fire Nation attacked... Just kidding.But in all seriousness due to several unfortunate events I died and went to heaven or whatever. I was given a mission and sent on my way to my next life. I suppose you could call it rebirth but the world I was reborn in is very different than Earth. There are many races and many new things including MAGIC! Unfortunately, there is little to no technology or science never underestimate the stupidity of a people who can just wave their hand and make fire."How does it work?"""It just works?""""What happens if you give it extra oxygen?"""What is 'oxygen' is it tasty?"AN: Hey, this is my first official novel/fiction. I plan to separate it into several books and I have it all planned out I just have to write the actual story. I'll try to post at least once a week after I upload the first 30,000 words.Although this has a Mature tag it's only slightly mature. I don't go over the top with gore there may however be sexual scenes in later chapters.Parts of this are similar to mushoku tensei but the story later diverges from the canon.

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Stuff I Made Up

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYTRAGEDYSUPERNATURALMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOT

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Rating
3.2/ 5.0
Followers
185
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93,964

Chapters(27 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

  • John KashRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I think its a great story dont let those asshats get you down!
  • SammaelRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    For you dear author please write all you want. You have the right to it.
    For you haters please stop behaving like some young arogant throwing ones weight around brats.
    That simply can't understand one fact. Nearly everything bases itself on some premise.
    Everything has some begining. What was used once will probably be used more often.
    The author stated that Mushoku was his inpiration and that is all. In my opinion he shouldn't be inspired much on Mushoku couse:
    - The Mc is pathetic ballless and whitlles Coward(that portrayal is unlogical) even with all his power. He behaves like a little *itch.(That is probably the norm for the readers in jp, couse such characters are predominant(wich is ironic couse the characters mostly have no ounce of dominance themselves))
    -The action and events are cliche with cliche power over 9000.(school arcs, pathetic and wrong interpretation of a harem, once more useless mc, unneeded fillers, how it's so that everyone is dere? and much much more)
    -It is dominated by the above mentioned cliche events that like to repeat themselves after some chapters.
    -The Mc always ends nearly in the same situations, meaning even with all that power he is nothing more than a rag, used by others to clean the dirt .
    -Have I mentioned that most characters of Mushoku aren't orginal? Yes they are a rip of certain character types that are base ingredient of a typical jp novel or anime. So don't write about rip ofs and thefts, when your brilliant sight and perception can't see such simple things.
    Another thing I have read Mushoku, nearly all of it. When Rudy(Whimp) made himself some children I was thinking maybe, maybe now he will stop being such a pathetic little *itch and start to man up. No, He didn't. So i said myself enough is enough.
    So have some decency and stop spewing *ulls*it and ascend Mushoku till the level of Heaven.
    Author has only started, yes there are similarities, hope that Author will go as far way from Mushoku as he can(for the note as far a
  • dwoolfyRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    So far the story is fun to read.
    Pro’s:
    -Interesting premise with a very promising potential.  Having the infinite cycles in rebirth as part of his situation offers an endless amount of potential in growth and regrowth as he continues to get reincarnated.
    -Likable MC.  As much as an evil %^#& of an MC can make a story interesting, a likable MC draws me more as I can relate to his motives.  I also just plain like to like the characters that I read about.
    Con’s:
    -The MC seems to get a bit too OP to fast and has been born into an ideal situation with a rather OP family who have royal connections as well.  The 3 bonuses that ‘heaven’ gives the character just make it so we are not really going to have a truly growing MC.  If the magic potential and level was significantly nerf’d than the MC could learn more about magic from incarnation to incarnation gaining a greater potential because of his memories.  As it stands the story will probably be totally about his first reincarnation instead of taking advantage of the basic plot line of the infinite reincarnations.
    Overall:  This is a fun read for me and recommended to those who want something rather light-hearted without a lot of brutality here at RR.  Yes the MC becomes way too OP way to early in the story which also means that this story is not really going to be a very serious contender as a high quality story, or as a serious story.
    UPDATE:  Mother’s POV/CH 23
    Not really any changes in the direction of the story.  In reality the whole portion of the story that has to do with heaven and his guardian angel seems to be completely unneeded so far, and could be considered more a distraction to the fairly good story.
    Of note I still think that developing the infinite reincarnations aspect of the story has a great deal of potential, but the MC as he is with his current benefits could easily be much the same as some of the other OP MC’s that are found here at RR.  Yes I enjoy this type of story, but the way that it is developin
  • 00petar00Royal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    So you can’t review this story without comparing it to mushoku tensei if you have read mushoku tensei before trying this out
    First let me say that i am a great fan of most writers here that are serious about their writing even if story isn’t always great/perfect as long as i enjoy it i will give my support to the author.
    Problem here is there are people that don’t really   deserve my/readers support on this site, i won’t say that your story is completely undeserving but you must understand that you are practically copying too much from mushoku tensei.
    I am not saying that you should not take ideas from other novels, but there should be a limit to it. I was practically annoyed though the whole 24 chapters i read as i had nothing better to do, even though i don’t think i should’ve read that much.
    If you really want to be a writer you should be more serious about it, this just seems as if it is a child thought that mushoku tensei was great and had nothing better to do or any good imagination to make his own story and decided to copy everything he liked from mushoku tensei.
    It is just a knock off copy of mushoku tensei, some chapters feel rushed, it is obvious that this site has many novice writers so if one of them wants to copy a great novel which is written by someone who is a writer for a living it can’t be better.. You aren’t proving that you are better if you copy someone’s story and make your own version of it. There are also good writers that i can compare professional writers to on this site but what matters is being original, most stories these days are about hero summoning, demon lord, dungeons and so on, there are some unique takes on these like “botched summoning” for example. What i like to see is original ideas…
    What bothers me the most here is you shamelessly using “original” tag, i just don’t understand how you can use that tag when you practically decided to copy so much from mushoku tensei.
    Final verdict:
    This story isn’t all that bad (comparing only
  • halestlemonRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Mr.Author, please look up the meaning of the word 'plagiarism'.
    Even if you add some bits and pieces from your own imagination, that does not make this an 'original' story. You mixing some small elements of your own imagination just makes the story worse.
    Finally, the worst part of this whole fiasco is that you never, not even once, in any form or way, reference or identify Mushoku Tensei as your source of 'inspiration'. Looks like you are trying to pass this off as your own work, when it is not. The plagiarism is blatant, and it is unpleasant to read.
    Instead of reading this, just go to baka-tsuki and read Mushoku Tensei.
  • thedarkkinggrimRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    read mushoku Tensei instead . some chapters are copied and paused right out of the novel. just rephrased.
  • RaphaimRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    Was going great till you plagiarized.
  • Cameron7Royal Road
    ★ 0.5
    This is can be called nothing else other than theft.
    Apart from the first 3 chapters this is almost a total copy Mushoku Tensei, just some names have been changed and parts paraphrased (to the detriment of he original story).
    The fact that you have come to this sight just to get views on a story that is absolute scam is pretty sad, however if you go on to ask for donations for something like this it could only be seen as theft.
    The only piece of enjoyment I have received from this whole experience is the ironic humour of your name 'Stuff I Made Up' in comparison to your conduct.
    Anyway if you want to enjoy the original and far superior novel then read this:
    http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Mushoku_Tensei:Volume_01_Prologue